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similiesslip February 3 2012, 20:02:26 UTC
I certainly hope that they catch whoever did it. I hate to hear that a mother of young children was robbed:( The article said that her children are now frightened at the house. Poor kids!

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jacq22 February 4 2012, 02:47:27 UTC
Had trouble (my computer!) dowloading story, but imagine this was a frightening thing for the kids.

Love the Irish accent...fun! Reminds me of an episode of Mrs Brown and her boys.

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basric February 5 2012, 13:25:28 UTC
Since her mom broadcasted it everywhere along with the daughter, unless he was stupid enough to have kept anything but the cash, he's gone. But I've found crooks are basically an arrogant lot and some downright stupid.

Well done.

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alien_infinity February 5 2012, 17:51:37 UTC
What a slimy protagonist you created! This was well written. :)

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myrna_bird February 6 2012, 02:32:39 UTC
Well, sometimes it just doesn't pay to advertise.
That wiley guy knew just what to do!

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