Starlight

[silenceguardian]

Title Starlight
Pairing: Jesse/Andrew
Wordcount: 483
Summary: Based off of Sing for Absolution by Muse, loosely.
Author's notes: So this is a drabble I wrote for lafemmecasanova, it's all kinds of ridiculous, mostly because it's like a big poem. BUT I HOPE YOU ENJOY. <333

Comments

This is gorgeous!

[slasher48]

I LOVE THIS.

It reads almost Shakespearean and you are so fucking talented for figuring out words to rhyme with everything (spoke, woke, choke, grace, pace, face...).

I love the story that is told here. Jesse pining after Andrew but not actively. Just as part of him, as he fumbles through life -- in the background of his mind, he's always pondering Andrew, wandering through what he might be doing, squandering minutes he could spend on other things by contemplating the what-ifs (I have been there and so I know).

The last part -- is that supposed to be a little ambiguity? A choose-your-own-ending? Because Andrew can't be that oblivious, right? He would have heard Jesse tiptoeing ONCE. ;)

IN CONCLUSION YOU ARE MAGNIFICENT AND ONCE AGAIN? I ADORE YOU. ♥

[lafemmecasanova]

Clearly I can barely breathe right now. That was the most perfect poem in the entire world, the rhyme scheme was refreshing and brilliant. Just. The ending. oh my god. screaming. i adore you, charlotte.