Comments | silent_crow: Three drunken nights

silent_crow

Three drunken nights

Apr 19, 2010 18:38

Title: Three drunken nights
Genre: broken pieces
Rating: harmless

Written for dxs triangle drabble challenge , theme #19

( 4000 rainy nights with you )

broken pieces of her mind

Comments 7

rheakurokawa April 19 2010, 20:17:56 UTC

you're amazing and i'm incredibly jealous. but such is life. no seriously. that was so good. you write... even better. (how is that possible?) somehow. i dunno. tehnique-wise... i dunno. i need to think more about it.
but seriously... and they changed. somehow. they changed. shinya did. it's a shift and shinya's not so weak anymore. he wasn't weak before either, but now he seems stronger. i dunno. in comparison die seems more fragile. i really don't know. i read and love it. and yet something. a lot feels different. tone, tehnique, feeling, them... but it's a good sort of different, one that i have to learn all over again. i think. i really don't know. it's a feeling i get that i can't help. it was beautiful

silent_crow April 19 2010, 20:50:55 UTC

Heh. Honestly? I was writing on this for...like two weeks. And I was almost done when you posted your fic. And I was like oh no oh no please no don't read it NOW because if you''ll do, you'll start questioning yourself and never post your story!!!!!! Weirdo's, aren't we ( ... )

rheakurokawa April 19 2010, 21:12:06 UTC

i'm sorry. we both need to be locked into a room and slap each other whenever we feel these thoughts coming. ahahahah. we are not weirdos actually though. most writers, artists, creators go through the exact same thing. and i've read and listened to a few to know that. it's part of who we are ( ... )

feelthefalling April 20 2010, 10:53:30 UTC

I... Honestly, I'm not sure what to say. All I can think to do is spill everything out - all the feelings, thoughts, emotions - into this comment. (Which I almost fear doing.)
Stressed, I've been feeling very stressed lately. And while reading these drunken nights I felt... calm. The first one really brought that sense to me, I think.
And this,
“What the hell are you doing?”
“Playing bondage games with your hand.”
this made me smile.
I don't want to sound ...kiss ass or like I'm saying this just because I have to or something...
But I truly enjoyed reading this. I enjoy most of the things you write and this was just... amazing in my book. It definitely went deep for me and touched something restless inside, bringing a small sense of peace.

(ps I almost didn't post this *embarrassed*)

silent_crow April 21 2010, 09:07:59 UTC

I am definitely glad you posted this. It made me happy, very happy. After very long and painful time, when I was trying hard to go back to writing, to any sort of writing...this is the best reward ( ... )

feelthefalling April 22 2010, 23:23:47 UTC

People tell me I've always tended to act older than my age. (Academically and mentally ( ... )

sick_pride April 21 2010, 22:54:21 UTC

“What the hell are you doing?”

“Playing bondage games with your hand.”

Why I am surprised. You always managed to let me feel them by a few words. Die, and Shinya. Just by the use of a few words. Why I am even surprised. It's you. After all, it's you.

I guess I'll smoke at least 3 or 4 cigarettes while writing this but nevermind. My brain needs nicotine to work properly ( who am I kidding... I've tried to left a proper comment since days, blacked my lungs and it didn't work nevertheless).

Well, Eve... that was immense. And calm. Calming. Your writing style has definitely changed but still, it's the same. It's you but... calmer. Happier. And for the first time in ages I am not jealous. I am happy, content. At this very moment - and back then as I read this for the first time- I smoke relaxed for the simple reason you're getting better. You're fine.

You and Die/Shin... you have no idea how happy I am that you write them again.

You know…It’s not about the oblivion, he tried to explain when I asked him about it. It’s more like…eh ( ... )