Fic: Rope, Pt. 6 of ? (Lie To Me)

[silent_snark]

Chapter Five: Remote Viewing

It’s like foreplay.

Slumped low in the driver’s seat, gripping the wheel so tight his knuckles jut a bloodless white from the surrounding skin, the man in the Mercedes works himself up with scenarios of revenge. He indulges in violent fantasies, replaying them over and over again like snuff films projected against

Comments

[avidreadergirl]

I'm glad you decided to use the chapter, I like it a lot. and I'm looking forward to more! :)

[silent_snark]

I'm glad I decided to change the opening line. You were right about that (as always). I'm hoping to send you the next chapter later tonight, but unfortunately it won't be new to you, since you've already seen in it six or seven slightly different versions.

Thank you again for all your help. :)

[drnihilism]

Can't wait to see what happens next!

[silent_snark]

Thanks! I won't keep you waiting long.

[crumpled_up]

Short, but I like it. This'll be interesting. You've got me hooked and I'm impatient lol. This is me not so subtly nudging you. ;)

Opening the camera ap Er, btw, there should be two p's for app, not ap.

[silent_snark]

You've got me hooked and I'm impatient lol.
That sound you hear...? That's my evil laughter. :D

Er, btw, there should be two p's for app, not ap.
Once again, your attention to detail is much appreciated! I've come to the conclusion that I'm pretty hopeless at spotting my own typos. This one is particularly galling considering the amount of money I've spent buying apps. Thanks again.

BTW, I'm saving your LtM post for later on tonight, to reward myself after I've sent off the next chapter to my long-suffering beta. I'm looking forward to reading your thoughts on the eps.