Do It For Me

[silentchord]

Title: Do It For Me
Pairing: Ronnie/James, implied Ronnie/Mario
Rating: R
Word count: 647
Disclaimer: Didn’t happen, don’t own
Summary: Ronnie needs. James wants.
A/N: Written for a prompt on f1flashfic.

Comments

[theruo]

Oh god... I'm so glad you put it here <3 I'm not sure how to say this so you know that I'm sincere but it's incredible (moreso) to read again. The pain is done so subtly it's brilliant. It just fills me with a longing for everything to be okay :( I was more touched by Ronnie this time, so touched, but the first time it was James, and that idea of yours at the end. Staggering. It feels so real, having read his bio and feeling like I know him well. He could think those exact words, I think, especially with Ronnie... Unghh.

[silentchord]

Thank you so much. To have such wonderful feedback from someone I admire as an author and on a piece of work that - whilst short, was incredibly enjoyable to write - really means the absolute world. In all honesty, I could have written more. But it felt so perfect to end it where I did, I just had to go with my gut feeling.

I love that both times you've read it, you've come away sympathising with someone different. That just makes me so freakin' giddy. Especially because, at the root of it, they're both hurting. ♥ ♥ ♥

[theruo]

Your gut feeling was very good, I think the ache at the end is perfect. God, it hurts. I want to beg you to write more Ronnie, and more James, please, please, please. I'm so happy to know that you get what I meant, and you are making me smile :DDDD I also don't know how I feel about someone saying they admire me as an author, it seems a bit overwhelming and hard to accept. Thank you...

I am so very glad to have your lovely comments and your amazing stories in the retro world <3 *runs away before shameless lovefest commences*