Hmm...

[silentdarkmind]

So ok, it's another song

Comments

what i think...honestly

[twilights]

its okay. but feels a little firstdraftish.
for a song doesn't it need a chorus... and i dunno, maybe it would sound a just perfect if i could actually hear you singing it, maybe too perfect. maybe i dont want to hear it.

you are a good song writer though, no doubt about it

well

[silentdarkmind]

it is a first draft, all my songs are... I usually dont edit them after the first time I write them...

I think I made the chorus changing in this one... yeah, the lines in caps are the chorus