Commentary for Strangeandcharm's "Suck it Up, Part 6"
As promised, but with flaws, because goddammit LJ was being annoying. I tried to backspace a phrase and instead it operated the back button on the browser and I lost the draft. Which is REALLY annoying!
Luckily, I wasn't.... TOO far in. So, this is a commentary for Suck it Up, Part 6 by Strangeandcharm.
“You need to stop complaining,” Castiel said flatly, as though he expected Dean to shut up and stop, just like that. Which, if Dean had any sense, he would have. Castiel had shown him time and again over the last few weeks that he wasn’t going to take any shit, and if Dean’s body wasn’t so quick at healing he’d have the bruises to prove it. At least his teeth had grown back. Stupid fucking angel and his stupid fucking strength.
This is where I am. And that last line made me giggle.
Oh, a willing slave... And I think Dean does see it, he just doesn't want to. It's all about deprivation. ;)
Hehe, little epic rant of epicnes...
Does anyone else have problems with the voices in their heads when they're reading stories? I'll just be reading it, and every once in a while I'll remind myself to phase Cas' dialogue into Misha Collin's voice. It's a bigger problem when I'm reading Olympia-m's A Roman Story because it's AU and they're younger, but it still happens all the time.
Also, not that anyone knows how Janis Stevens is since she's just an actress from my community theatre, but I've got her voice stuck in my head at the moment.
Also, Max- my brother- is playing Okami right here, just so you all know, I've got the warbled talk of a video game set in Feudal Japan that wouldn't actually get Japanese voice actors. Instead all of the characters sound like the adults from the Charlie Brown cartoons,and I'm reading DeanCas through it. :P
I really thought Castiel understood Dean's lust at this point...
Castiel is very bitter...
"You can call me Castiel." Ooooooooh......
Castiel took off his coat. It was such a weird thing for him to do that Dean stared at him suspiciously, confused. Castiel never took off his coat. The last time he’d done it was when Dean had bitten him the first time, on the neck, but there was no way Castiel was going to let him bite him there again. These days it was wrists or nothing, as though the angel didn’t want their mouths getting too close together.
I'm getting strangely garbled feelings about this passage.
The dialogue right here is melt-worthy amazing in a REALLY kinky way.
"Where would you like to bite me?"
"Is this a trick question?"
As Castiel presents himself like a well-made feast, detailing every last delicacy. This is cruelty to a hungry vampire.
He was so hungry…. but he was horny, too, and Castiel was apparently stripping for him. He had no idea what was going on here, but he liked it.
I don't know, I don't trust Castiel at this point. I think he's got something up his sleeves.
Haha, Castiel the biology professor.
He kicked off his shoes and reached down to remove his socks, somehow making the action elegant.
I love everything about the ridiculousness of removing socks when you're undressing. Of course, I hate socks and rarely wear them, so it won't be something I'll have to worry about, most likely.
(Though when I do wear socks, they're these large, colorful, fuzzy things... hehe.)
Okay, this is all very hot and kinky, but still the idea of Dean drinking blood from Cas' dick is very.... um... hm. :/
Castiel smiling wickedly... hehe...
Ha, I love the slow realization. And now we see it all. Cas is using Dean's lust the same way Dean used Cas' earlier. Payback's a bitch, eh?
The last time Dean had seen that look had been when the angel had bent the rules of Heaven and told him about Chuck’s connection to the archangel.
I always loved that scene. It was a fantastic hint towards Castiel's affections for Dean, not to mention sneaky Castiel is damn sexy. "Just so you understand why I can't help."
My brother likes to refer to food as "the sweet nectar and ambrosia of the gods." But now, Castiel's in his boxers but it hasn't even been mentioned whether he's hard or not. It seemed like the kind of thing Dean would have noticed.
Dean never sees it coming because Castiel always does it when he's "distracted." Also, I think Cas is going to get Dean RIGHT to the edge and then leave, because that seems like the kind of dickish thing Castiel would do at this point to help teach Dean obedience.
“Any other scenario is an illusion. I am stronger than you, I’m better than you, I’m faster than you. Nothing you can do can weaken me. You depend on me for everything, Dean, and you know it.”
1. Hot.
2. "There is a right and a wrong here, Cas, and you know it." Just got in my head. Helped with the whole voice thing I go on about for no reason whatsoever.
"Through what door?" Was also hot. Oh, and that conversation Dean and Cas had in the greenroom was like, my favorite Castiel conversation EVER. "I need you to take me to see Sam." "Why?" "I need to talk to him about something." "What's that?" Yes, that one. Particularly Castiel's, "No," at the end aaaaalways made me melt because it was so POUTY and adorable and I loved it.
Well, it's not ALL bravado... at the moment Castiel definitely has the mojo to back himself up, and he's not going to let Dean weaken him enough that he doesn't.
I'm imaging this as sort of biting down and tearing chunks out of Dean's neck...
Dean is back! And the way Castiel asked him.... Mmmmmm. :)
Oh dear.... and he's gone just like that. Poor Cas. Strangeandcharm, you are EXCELLENT, and this is all done so flawlessly it's beautiful and brilliant and you're fantastic. Hooray. :)
Well, I was almost right... except for how I was completely wrong... Castiel left Dean unsatisfied, though, so at least I was right that far.
Haha, oh poor Bobby, not used to Cas' surprise entrances. :P
"When will he come home?" Reminds me of that Cat Stevens song, Cats in the Cradle, even though they totally have nothing in common but that line. And even that line isn't the same. The line in the song is, "When you coming home, Dad?" and they really are nothing alike at all, but you know what, it's my mind and this is my commentary and I shall get whatever songs I want stuck in my head, and you can't do anything about it, so there. Bwahaha.
My, my, now I feel powerful.
Castiel agrees with Bobby. That was wonderful.
Excellent chapter. Hoorah hooray, now I have to go get dressed, because it's 3:00 and I'm still in my pajamas. Nor have I eaten anything besides some frozen frosting... yummy...
I do hope you like, Strangeandcharm. :)
Luckily, I wasn't.... TOO far in. So, this is a commentary for Suck it Up, Part 6 by Strangeandcharm.
“You need to stop complaining,” Castiel said flatly, as though he expected Dean to shut up and stop, just like that. Which, if Dean had any sense, he would have. Castiel had shown him time and again over the last few weeks that he wasn’t going to take any shit, and if Dean’s body wasn’t so quick at healing he’d have the bruises to prove it. At least his teeth had grown back. Stupid fucking angel and his stupid fucking strength.
This is where I am. And that last line made me giggle.
Oh, a willing slave... And I think Dean does see it, he just doesn't want to. It's all about deprivation. ;)
Hehe, little epic rant of epicnes...
Does anyone else have problems with the voices in their heads when they're reading stories? I'll just be reading it, and every once in a while I'll remind myself to phase Cas' dialogue into Misha Collin's voice. It's a bigger problem when I'm reading Olympia-m's A Roman Story because it's AU and they're younger, but it still happens all the time.
Also, not that anyone knows how Janis Stevens is since she's just an actress from my community theatre, but I've got her voice stuck in my head at the moment.
Also, Max- my brother- is playing Okami right here, just so you all know, I've got the warbled talk of a video game set in Feudal Japan that wouldn't actually get Japanese voice actors. Instead all of the characters sound like the adults from the Charlie Brown cartoons,and I'm reading DeanCas through it. :P
I really thought Castiel understood Dean's lust at this point...
Castiel is very bitter...
"You can call me Castiel." Ooooooooh......
Castiel took off his coat. It was such a weird thing for him to do that Dean stared at him suspiciously, confused. Castiel never took off his coat. The last time he’d done it was when Dean had bitten him the first time, on the neck, but there was no way Castiel was going to let him bite him there again. These days it was wrists or nothing, as though the angel didn’t want their mouths getting too close together.
I'm getting strangely garbled feelings about this passage.
The dialogue right here is melt-worthy amazing in a REALLY kinky way.
"Where would you like to bite me?"
"Is this a trick question?"
As Castiel presents himself like a well-made feast, detailing every last delicacy. This is cruelty to a hungry vampire.
He was so hungry…. but he was horny, too, and Castiel was apparently stripping for him. He had no idea what was going on here, but he liked it.
I don't know, I don't trust Castiel at this point. I think he's got something up his sleeves.
Haha, Castiel the biology professor.
He kicked off his shoes and reached down to remove his socks, somehow making the action elegant.
I love everything about the ridiculousness of removing socks when you're undressing. Of course, I hate socks and rarely wear them, so it won't be something I'll have to worry about, most likely.
(Though when I do wear socks, they're these large, colorful, fuzzy things... hehe.)
Okay, this is all very hot and kinky, but still the idea of Dean drinking blood from Cas' dick is very.... um... hm. :/
Castiel smiling wickedly... hehe...
Ha, I love the slow realization. And now we see it all. Cas is using Dean's lust the same way Dean used Cas' earlier. Payback's a bitch, eh?
The last time Dean had seen that look had been when the angel had bent the rules of Heaven and told him about Chuck’s connection to the archangel.
I always loved that scene. It was a fantastic hint towards Castiel's affections for Dean, not to mention sneaky Castiel is damn sexy. "Just so you understand why I can't help."
My brother likes to refer to food as "the sweet nectar and ambrosia of the gods." But now, Castiel's in his boxers but it hasn't even been mentioned whether he's hard or not. It seemed like the kind of thing Dean would have noticed.
Dean never sees it coming because Castiel always does it when he's "distracted." Also, I think Cas is going to get Dean RIGHT to the edge and then leave, because that seems like the kind of dickish thing Castiel would do at this point to help teach Dean obedience.
“Any other scenario is an illusion. I am stronger than you, I’m better than you, I’m faster than you. Nothing you can do can weaken me. You depend on me for everything, Dean, and you know it.”
1. Hot.
2. "There is a right and a wrong here, Cas, and you know it." Just got in my head. Helped with the whole voice thing I go on about for no reason whatsoever.
"Through what door?" Was also hot. Oh, and that conversation Dean and Cas had in the greenroom was like, my favorite Castiel conversation EVER. "I need you to take me to see Sam." "Why?" "I need to talk to him about something." "What's that?" Yes, that one. Particularly Castiel's, "No," at the end aaaaalways made me melt because it was so POUTY and adorable and I loved it.
Well, it's not ALL bravado... at the moment Castiel definitely has the mojo to back himself up, and he's not going to let Dean weaken him enough that he doesn't.
I'm imaging this as sort of biting down and tearing chunks out of Dean's neck...
Dean is back! And the way Castiel asked him.... Mmmmmm. :)
Oh dear.... and he's gone just like that. Poor Cas. Strangeandcharm, you are EXCELLENT, and this is all done so flawlessly it's beautiful and brilliant and you're fantastic. Hooray. :)
Well, I was almost right... except for how I was completely wrong... Castiel left Dean unsatisfied, though, so at least I was right that far.
Haha, oh poor Bobby, not used to Cas' surprise entrances. :P
"When will he come home?" Reminds me of that Cat Stevens song, Cats in the Cradle, even though they totally have nothing in common but that line. And even that line isn't the same. The line in the song is, "When you coming home, Dad?" and they really are nothing alike at all, but you know what, it's my mind and this is my commentary and I shall get whatever songs I want stuck in my head, and you can't do anything about it, so there. Bwahaha.
My, my, now I feel powerful.
Castiel agrees with Bobby. That was wonderful.
Excellent chapter. Hoorah hooray, now I have to go get dressed, because it's 3:00 and I'm still in my pajamas. Nor have I eaten anything besides some frozen frosting... yummy...
I do hope you like, Strangeandcharm. :)