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"Scarlet" for MOUETTE_LUNAIRE

Nov 29, 2009 16:26

Title: Scarlet
Form: Fanfiction
For: mouette_lunaire
Prompt: Scarlet (child, creepy monster doll or both), gen, up for any genre/scenario

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evokers November 29 2009, 18:47:57 UTC

this is amazing! there should be more homecoming fic in general but definitely more with the characters interacting as kids! i really liked the insight you shed on scarlet. all of this was just so wonderful. *A*

i really love the line "What the story does not tell is whether she loved her dolls so much because they looked like her, or whether she looked like her dolls because she loved them so much."
the description in that last section is just beautiful. :)

mouette_lunaire November 29 2009, 19:34:08 UTC

I love this so so much, THANK YOU! I never thought of her like that, but you pull the idea off so well! The letter / admission form snippets make the atmosphere fantastic as well, so again, thanks a lot!

leesers November 30 2009, 00:00:51 UTC

Wow. Just- wow. This was stunning. I'm a big Homecoming fan and Scarlet was, personally, my favorite boss battle and child so I was really excited to even see a request/fill for fanfiction featuring her.

You did such a fantastic job with Alex, Elle and Josh in the beginning. They all felt spot on to me, and your introduction was such a great way of slipping us into Scarlet's life- a character who we were barely able to interact with during the game. The entire story is written beautifully, but I have to say the last part is truly something.

Thank you for writing such an incredible story ♥