Me versus Life

[silenthero13]

Hello this is a poem that a wrote this week, i am really pround of this poem and i think it is not all that bad, i wish for you to tell me if i am right or not. And to Mike i know this is a hard time so the best of luck to your father and to your family

Comments

[fanatic5328]

freaking great, makes me wanna quit. smoothly going from a battle scene description to a questioning of immortality

[silenthero13]

what do you mean "makes me wanna quit"? and thank you, i just wish i had more opinions on it.

[jamaicensis]

sorry been awhile since i looked. i agree with mike its great. its true that life sucks when its not filled.