Elementary.

[silentsanctuary]

Title: Elementary
Author: silentsanctuary
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,154
Warnings: Slightly drabble-y.
Pairing: House/Wilson
Disclaimer: Not mine. Property of Fox, so on so forth.
Note: Dedicated to the dearest soralin, for forgiveness and assistance.

Comments

[silentsanctuary]

Oh, good; for a bit there I was wondering if everyone was just skimming over everything before and going "ooh, this is the only good part!" XD.

[soralin]

*feels fuzzy*

Gah, you've done it again. Lovely, beautiful, so natural. Your take on House is so refreshing, and I love the little detail on the cane spinning.

Without Wilson behind him, House would have truly been miserable.

Sometimes, House hoped like he was the only one who knew that.

That part makes me want to cry. The very end makes me want to squee at the top of my lungs. I shall poke you to death with House's cane if you do not write more.

Thank you.

[silentsanctuary]

Aw. Please don't cry on my account. Squeeing is better.

Go ahead and poke- it'll make me write faster.

("Mistress, I've already written ten pages of House-Wilson smut!" *whipcrack* "I mean, your wish is my command!")

[soralin]

HAHAHA. Okay, well ten pages of smut is probably a bit questionable. But you know what I mean. *pokes*

Great!

[juliedeeley]

I really enjoyed your story, thanks very much. Hope to see more of them.

Re: Great!

[silentsanctuary]

I plan to write more, yes. Different scenes and styles, though.

[gabsy]

Words fail me.

Thank you!

[silentsanctuary]

You wouldn't believe how many times I failed at words while writing this. XD

You're very welcome.

[secondsilk]

Wonderful.
The back and forth in the structure between the two of them worked very well - the parallels.
Their first meeting, and House's understanding of their relationship - the fact that he uses Sherlock and Watson, too. It fits them very well.
The idea of Wilson on his chair with his head pressed against the window to see House is too cute, and a little bittersweet. And you brought it in very well.
And Wilson eating breakfast. Hee!

[silentsanctuary]

I love rhetorical devices dealing with parallels- it just flows v. well.

Sort of like the puppy in the window, the one with the waggily tail.