You know, you have some lovely turns of phrase in your writing. Like 'dust that speaks of her absence' - very nice. I love the final sentence, too, that dismissive conclusion which fits so well.
Also, loving how the S/J reference is so organic. It's so part of Sam's character here that it only needs the slightest mention to remind us of it. Well done!
Also, loving how the S/J reference is so organic. It's so part of Sam's character here that it only needs the slightest mention to remind us of it.
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked that :) I think of it as something she might not even be conscious of thinking, it's just something intrinsic and inate to both her work and life.
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Missed you.
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So glad that you liked this one. It's been a WIP for months and months, odd considering it's so short!!
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*grins lopsidedly*
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Thank you :D
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Also, loving how the S/J reference is so organic. It's so part of Sam's character here that it only needs the slightest mention to remind us of it. Well done!
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked that :) I think of it as something she might not even be conscious of thinking, it's just something intrinsic and inate to both her work and life.
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