Fic: Honey and the Moon (Arthur/Eames)

Nov 09, 2011 21:08

Title: Honey and the Moon
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Arthur is blind now, but it doesn't make a difference. Arthur could go insane, lose his limbs, burn down the country. But Eames would still be there, because his feelings for Arthur have crept up on him like a thief in the dark and they're here to stay.
Word Count: 1k
A/N: Drabble! ( Read more... )

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fandorina13 November 9 2011, 17:51:28 UTC
Well, this was quite a read. I love the atmosphere you set up with "this collection of thoughts and impressions", and I'm stealing your sentence cause I don't know how else describe it (and it's time like that I realize I have so much more to learn in english).

But I'm digressing.

Yeah, I really liked the feeling of this fic, and its pace. How you took a heavy start, with Arthur blind, and finally I have the feeling it's not quite about that, but about love, and disabilities, that we all have, in various degrees but still, and how to overcome them, how to live with them, and how to do it with someone else.

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siliconearth November 9 2011, 18:15:50 UTC
I HAVE NO CLUE HOW TO DESCRIBE IT EITHER :/ What is this? I. Don't. Know. I was penning various paragraphs in this one folder, and Arthur being blind slipped in without me even realizing it.
I really love what you took away from these drabbles, all random and unconnected, (which must be exasperating)and I am so glad you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting! :)

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_profiterole_ November 9 2011, 19:25:34 UTC
What a beautiful fic!

My favourite part was the tape and Eames offering to read to Arthur. <3

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siliconearth November 10 2011, 07:11:23 UTC
So glad you liked it :)
Ah, Arthur's stubborn, he wouldn't want help :/
Thanks for your wonderful comment bb <3

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just_jane_doe November 9 2011, 20:21:18 UTC
I love all the phases and stages of this fic. The irridescence of sunlight on the waves when Eames is swimming. The darkness that lies within Arthur that rages and consumes. The fear of losing Arthur in a crowd and the brightness of noise in Arthur's ears at the concert. I really really liked this... I love vulnerability - especially when it's tangible like in this fic.

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siliconearth November 10 2011, 07:12:47 UTC
I love that you enjoyed these parts of the fic, and I love vulnerability too, because there are so many facets to it. I was really nervous about this story, and your comment made me smile :) Thank you.

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mugglemiranda November 9 2011, 20:23:16 UTC
This was simply beautiful! I loved the snapshots of them as they live with love and Arthur's new challenge. I don't like the d or h word. I really enjoyed how there were still moments out at the beach and concerts. I feel like Arthur being blind just heightened Eames' love for him and they are so perfect together. You painted a vivid picture with your wonderful words. Thanks so much for sharing this with us

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siliconearth November 10 2011, 07:21:48 UTC
omg what an awesome comment. I am happy beyond words that you liked this and felt they worked as a couple. you are so right about using the word challenged, by the way, will do the same in my future fics. Thanks for brightening my day :)

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siliconearth November 10 2011, 07:15:05 UTC
I know, I thought that it would be hypocritical to write a drabble about love that's pushing the Oh-he's-blind-poor-thing theme all the time...because real relationships aren't defined by pity. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for commenting :D

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