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Sep 07, 2010 04:18
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Message to a Future Child
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ephemery
September 6 2010, 16:29:06 UTC
Thank you so much (so so much)! I feel the last one is the least complicated too, I'm just really worried if the ~*message*~ of the first two comes through? or if the ending of the first seems too abrupt ffff.
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braska
September 6 2010, 21:38:19 UTC
Oh, wow -- These are wonderful, the third one especially. You have such gorgeous imagery, and the way you use line breaks is very interesting.
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ephemery
September 15 2010, 10:24:29 UTC
A late reply, but I just want to say thank you so much for reading ;3;
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