Lights Will Guide You Home

Jun 20, 2008 00:25

He is a disaster waiting to happen: the Titanic the precise moment before it hits the iceberg and sinks, a skydiver who just jumped out of a plane without a parachute. He pines after Bella Swan when it’s clear that she will never love him with quite the same intensity, if she develops a romantic attraction at all.

Perhaps the worst bit is that ( Read more... )

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anonymous June 20 2008, 08:20:19 UTC
This is fantastic. You convey the bitterness, angst and hurt between the two of them so well; it's electrifying. Angsty!Leah/Jacob Sex is the best kind of L/J sex for sure :)

This isn’t how destruction is supposed to work, she thinks. You’re supposed to learn from it, pick up the ashes and begin again. You’re not supposed to repeat your mistakes.

Favourite line. Beautiful, just beautiful.

Excellent, well done!

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silken_star June 20 2008, 17:33:44 UTC
I love Leah/Jacob because there's so much angst and yes, hot sex! I'm so glad that you think I did a good job with them.

Thank you so much for the lovely review :)

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bodgei June 20 2008, 11:23:04 UTC
wow I realy realy liked this.

I've been thinking of them as a couple - the 'when you care enough to not control yourself couple'

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silken_star June 20 2008, 17:35:32 UTC
I think part of the fun in shipping them is that they're very uncontrolled, it's just wild and instinctual, since both of them are really messed up. Well, that's why I ship them, at least!

Thank you!

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bodgei June 21 2008, 00:08:41 UTC
yeah I toltaly love them for the whole she's not afraid to piss him off and he's not afraid to be pissed off

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medoraly June 20 2008, 14:31:37 UTC
Very nice, I like this one a lot, especially the ending.

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silken_star June 20 2008, 17:36:10 UTC
Thanks! And oh I love your icon.

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silken_star June 20 2008, 19:32:25 UTC
Thanks, Ayla! The ending was pretty much the only thing that I started with - I worked backwards - so it's nice that that worked. Yay for hatesex!Jacob/Leah!

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silken_star June 20 2008, 23:40:35 UTC
Haha I love your need to clarify that it isn't incest.

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