Aww I can't believe his dad is making an effort! Maybe he isn't a a total baddie.
Brian needs to come scoop Curt up in his arms and whisk him away so they can snuggle while Curt sleeps off the alcohol. LOL do you like these excellent plot suggestions? LOL :p
Beautiful work. Your dialogue works very well. And as always, the description is flawless. Loved the part about Curt's eyes, it had ME shivering!
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Brian needs to come scoop Curt up in his arms and whisk him away so they can snuggle while Curt sleeps off the alcohol. LOL do you like these excellent plot suggestions? LOL :p
Beautiful work. Your dialogue works very well. And as always, the description is flawless. Loved the part about Curt's eyes, it had ME shivering!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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