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silly_bella

The Past Comes Back to Bite You

Jul 04, 2009 11:24

Yeah. I haven't forgotten. I said I would finish it and I will.

I just sent the next part of it out for beta reading. And I'm working on the part after that. Want to review in preparation for the new chapter? http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3351658/1/The_Past_Comes_Back_to_Bite_You

Then I'm going to take a look at An Unexpected Life, my Jacob/Bella fic ( Read more... )

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silly_bella July 5 2009, 21:46:05 UTC

Have you read the Tekhne story? I would love to hear from you on it. Most of it was written and/or posted before I met you. I just remember being thrilled that I had Sam have a chat with Jacob about he and Bella as a couple (and a second talk scheduled later in the outline) after reading some of your comments. It wasn't really focused on the fact that she wasn't Native, but he was at least questioning the wisdom of the relationship. It's one of the retro-fixes I need to make.

It's long, though, and probably just about halfway done, so I understand that you might not want to put in the time.

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silly_bella July 5 2009, 22:08:33 UTC

Oooh -- that's good to know. And it gives me some good stuff that I need for later, because I have some gaps that need something. I figure right now, since it's always Jacob and Bella's POV and they are mostly alone or just with the pack or Charlie and/or Billy, that might not come into play. But there are some later scenes with large groups that I had planned and they needed more conflict, so that would add to them nicely.

You can bet I'll be asking you some more about that later.

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an Unexpected Life gabriel_deadman July 8 2009, 17:05:53 UTC

Hmmmmm... this is where I critique your fanfic offerings... first let me say that I appreciated very much the quality of the writing and storytelling, even if it was a bit oversexed for my tastes lol. Your representations of the characters was spot-on, even though it didn't fit Edward's character to not even make an appearance, unless his family didn't tell him and actively BLOCKED it from their minds...
But nonetheless, it was excellent, I in some ways liked it better than Edward and Bella ending up together...
Edward, after all, is a bit of a douche.

andreav456 July 21 2009, 03:40:12 UTC

I've always liked your fanfiction, I remember reading it back during my srs bsns days.

I still do, on occasion. :)

The Past Comes Back to Bite You ext_689808 June 29 2011, 06:20:42 UTC

I just read The Past Comes Back to Bite You, up to Chapter 38: Blame. Please say you have continued writing this story. It's soooo good.