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Deafening Silence - Chapter 4 of 5

Aug 22, 2011 14:55

Title: Deafening Silence - Chapter 4 of 5
Author: silmanumenel
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Rating: PG-13, for some language
Pairing: Danny/Steve, pre-slash, will turn into slash
Warnings: Angst
Revised Word Count: Overall: ~18.000 - Chapter 4: 2.272
Summary: Danny is behaving strangely and no one knows why. When Steve finally finds out, he might not like the ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

mecurtin August 22 2011, 16:43:11 UTC

As a mom, I endorse this mom. *munches cookie*

silmanumenel August 22 2011, 21:19:02 UTC

I'm really happy you think so! I don't have any children, so I could only look at how my mum usually acts and then try to imagine what Danny's mum would do.

bandbfan August 22 2011, 22:24:06 UTC

Really Loved Danny's Mom, straight forward, doesn't pull any punches and sees through the BS...maybe finally she will get through to Danny!
Loved this!
TYVM

silmanumenel August 23 2011, 12:33:22 UTC

:D Thanks! Glad you liked Danny's mum! She just knows him so well, and he can't hide anything from her. :)

huntress69 August 22 2011, 23:22:33 UTC

This was terrific! We Mom's know stuff (I can vouch for that) and we can always get away with talking openly to our kids - well, most of the time. I love your "Danny's Mom" so much and it is just what he needed. Looking forward to the finale.

silmanumenel August 23 2011, 12:35:52 UTC

Thanks a lot! I know how it is with mums, mine only has to look at me to know if something's wrong. I'm happy you like my take on Danny's mum, I can only guess how a mum would react in a situation like this as I don't have any children. :)

abbeyrd62561 August 23 2011, 06:46:21 UTC

Leave it to ma Williams to finish what kono started. I thought that was so good how he couldn't figth the feelings anymore. Geez I am quoting Reospeedwagon , a group in the 80's if you didn't know. But boy am I so glad that Danny asked Steve to come over. I can't wait to see how it goes but I will wait and be good, you have a wedding to take care of.

silmanumenel August 23 2011, 12:38:17 UTC

I didn't know the group, but that line certainly fits Danny. :) Now that his mum dragged everything into the open, he has to do something about all his feelings. Thanks for the comment and the patience. ;)