Duty or Loyalty - Prologue Part 3

[silmanumenel]

Title: Duty or Loyalty - Prologue Part 3
Author: silmanumenel
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: None here, will eventually be Danny/Steve
Warnings: None, as far as I can tell.
Word Count: 1.459
Summary: Danny's life is not what you would call normal, and growing up is not exactly easy when half of your family belongs to the mafia. Or: The AU

Comments

[echoing_seas]

So I just re-read all the posted parts! Thanks for sending me the link so I was able to to so! :) I love how you've written Danny!!!! His struggle with how to deal with his family was wonderfully written, and his argument with Debbie about his decision not to tell Rachel the fully story is so realistic! I can't wait to read more!!!!! :)

[silmanumenel]

I didn't even know you were on LJ, too! Thanks so much for the comment, I'm glad you like how I've written Danny! :) And I'm happy you think the argument with Debbie worked, I literally added it at the last minute while editing. ;)

[mardigrasmaven]

Just read all three prologue parts today and I'm bouncing in my seat about how good this is! So excited for part 4! I can't wait!

[silmanumenel]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! :D Part 4 should come soon, probably tomorrow, as I'm at university all day today. :)