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Jan 01, 2020 16:16

Please direct all questions and complaints regarding my playing here. ♥

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anonymous September 23 2011, 23:35:33 UTC
I just wanted to bring up a point that is somewhat minor, but it is detracting from your overall portrayal of Rachel ( ... )

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silpheeding September 23 2011, 23:42:58 UTC
Ahh, thank you for bringing up all these points anon! I admit that it's been a bit of a while since I last canon reviewed, so something like her speech patterns is definitely something I could brush up on. I'll definitely be sure to keep all this in mind in my future tags. Thesauruses really are a lifesaver when I'm playing her, and I really should use them more often.

WHICH IS TO SAY BASICALLY thank you for this crit! ;w;/ I'll work hard to improve from here on out.

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anonymous September 24 2011, 00:16:22 UTC
I do understand, and perhaps it wouldn't hurt to review some of the canon with those points in mind so they can become more natural and regain freshness in your mind. I know it sometimes takes some practice to get down a voice, and that's definitely understandable which is why it's being brought up now rather than in the future when it will be far harder to correct.

And really, review can involve just reading over the script again or watching videos. I know YouTube has plenty of videos for both games on it. Also this might be handy: http://www.gamefaqs.com/xbox360/958721-blazblue-calamity-trigger/faqs/56986 That's the CT game script. I am sure that will be a big help because it can easily be referred to before tagging to check over word choice and speech pattern.

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silpheeding September 24 2011, 01:20:46 UTC
OH MAN I definitely could use this in my life lkajdsa. Thanks for all of your help anon! ♥

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