Opinion Needed
Read and tell me my errors? I haven't been writing a proper essay for ages (thanks to research proposals and whatnot lol), and I want to start brushing up on story-writing! Thanks in advance! ^_^
And please, constructive criticism XDDDD
She watched the stranger warily, her sharp eyes following the movement of the vial. Fleeting memories of witches and evil toads crossed her mind. Strange as it seems, she was not afraid of the brooding figure standing before her. Perhaps it had something to do with a string of sullen teenagers to handle monthly that made her somewhat conditioned for these types, she mused. But still...
What do you want, stranger?” she asked cautiously. No point in being rude, especially since she did not know how powerful the person could be. Again, she wondered about the vial proposed in front of her. Poison, or cure?
Her interest was aroused. A trade? She had nothing to trade, and everyone was aware of it. After all, what would a simple swordlady own?
And please, constructive criticism XDDDD
She watched the stranger warily, her sharp eyes following the movement of the vial. Fleeting memories of witches and evil toads crossed her mind. Strange as it seems, she was not afraid of the brooding figure standing before her. Perhaps it had something to do with a string of sullen teenagers to handle monthly that made her somewhat conditioned for these types, she mused. But still...
What do you want, stranger?” she asked cautiously. No point in being rude, especially since she did not know how powerful the person could be. Again, she wondered about the vial proposed in front of her. Poison, or cure?
Her interest was aroused. A trade? She had nothing to trade, and everyone was aware of it. After all, what would a simple swordlady own?