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perkyandproud December 24 2011, 02:23:54 UTC
Very nice story. I liked the realism and awkward uncertainty of Shishido's journey here :-) And the ending rocked :-)

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r05km December 25 2011, 16:16:46 UTC
Thank you ^^ Because as much as Shishido likes to pretend he's cool beans, he hasn't a clue really XD

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chouta_angel December 24 2011, 03:15:36 UTC
"Shut up, you used to eat dirt."

That forever will by my favorite insult ever.

There is so much to love about this fic though. Shishido's conscience, the conversation about laundry with his mother, Mizuki's 'nfu' and the entire Fuji encounter, Yuushi being a perv on everyone's mom, Dai and his Bieber rendition, and etc.

I am so, so incredibly glad to get to read the finished project.

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r05km December 25 2011, 16:22:24 UTC
Oh shh, you used to lick charcoal.

XD Thanks for all your encouragement and betaing! hahaha, Dai's not actually singing Beiber (although I can't be sure he hasn't covered it) but this song from the early 1990's: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5F2CZz8PyiI by Alabama.

In my headcannon, Yuushi is FOREVER a perve on everyone's mum. Especially Atobe's mum.

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sac527 December 24 2011, 08:47:18 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this. I loved how awkward Shishido was and I was amused by the way you wrote his thought process.

I definitely snickered the moment Shishido figured out his similarity to Dai. Similar taste, indeed. Also, thank you for the mental image of Atobe kicking Piyo off his chair after he lost his bed.

I can't decide which is more endearing: Choutarou not being sorry, but still stuttering or Choutarou secretly buying Shishido's photo like the fanboy he is. Oh, Choutarou...

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r05km December 25 2011, 16:24:01 UTC
I suggest rolling all the endearing bits up into one big ball of fluff. XD I'm really happy you took the time to tell me you liked the fic. Thank you~<3

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amooz December 25 2011, 01:05:48 UTC
I loved this. Every word. From Ryou's denial to slow grudging acceptance. My favourite thought were the conversations with his *ahem* conscience.

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r05km December 25 2011, 16:26:56 UTC
*krz* Every word? So they didn't notice all the lame typos? Over. *krz*
*krz* SHH! Shut up, now they'll definitely notice!*krz*
*krz* Four words: 'Jaw shoulder' You. Fail. *krz*

And Shishido-muse goes back in his box. XD Glad you liked it and took the time to let me know. I had enormous fun writing this.

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r05km January 2 2012, 14:27:21 UTC
Thank you ^^

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