Fic - Choices: Aftermath

[silver_bells13]

Title: Choices: Aftermath
Characters: Ratchet, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe
Rating: PG
Summary: Follow up fic to Choices.
Warnings: Disturbing themes

Comments

[renegadewriter8]

Ñuuuuu continue they must kiss and make up and then have lots and lots of sessions of interfacing! XD

Continue please!

[silver_bells13]

Maybe they will ^^ Thanks for the review

[mmouse15]

I think you've done an amazing job of capturing each one's emotions and reactions to the trauma. I'm really glad you did three sections and gave each mech his chance to voice his thoughts. Sunstreaker's section, especially, made me want to sob, since he made the decision for Vortex to rape Ratchet and not Sides.

I also would like to see more. This impasse can not continue, and I don't think First Aid would let it. I'll wait patiently for the next installment of this story, because you're doing such a great job and it will be well worth the wait.

[silver_bells13]

I think each of them feels guilty in their own way, and it'll take more than just a few days to get over it. Too often (in other fandoms, mostly) authors romanticize rape into the "you-raped-me-but-I-thank-you-for-showing-me-the-error-of-my-thinking-now-lets-have-lots-of-sex" type and that is my squick.

Thanks for your review ^^

[ex_velaquie]

Awww, so sad and angsty! (I'm eatin' it up. XD)

I hope you write more. I loved the different views of each bot and how you started/ended them with the same sentence. :3

[silver_bells13]

Thank you, vel ♥

[runyasan08]

... bwuh ;~;

[silver_bells13]

bwuh! :3

[wishseeker]

T_T so sad....I really liked this though! Please keep writing

[silver_bells13]

Thank you! :)