Kings

Nov 30, 2010 00:07

Title: Kings
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Word count: 1450
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Lost in the dark. (PWP)
Disclaimer: Pure imagination. No disrespect intended.

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genre: porn, fic, genre: erotica, kradam

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lilymajolis November 30 2010, 06:07:33 UTC
Oh... this is breathtaking!

I can't even quite figure out what to say, but this is so beautifully complex and gorgeous. Adam's dream providing the prompt, Kris taking courage from the dark to explore something new, the way Kris and Adam shift in their roles from one moment to the next- the way each is master and servant both. And Kris's heartbreaking past making his loving, trusting relationship with Adam even more of a revelation and a miracle.

Thank you so much! Your writing is utterly lovely.

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silver_keynotes November 30 2010, 16:05:55 UTC
I love seeing my work through your eyes. And I envy your way with feedback--keen analysis sensitively expressed. Thank you so much for this. ♥ ♥

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silver_keynotes November 30 2010, 16:07:53 UTC
And this is sweet and satisfying to hear! Thank you bb.

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morganlight November 30 2010, 08:38:54 UTC
You are awesome. I am your fangirl. I can't even comment coherently on your language use because it's so overwhelmingly fabulous. <3

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silver_keynotes November 30 2010, 16:09:42 UTC
It's so mutual, bb. ♥

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silver_keynotes November 30 2010, 16:17:54 UTC
Oh, wow. You have no idea how amazing this makes me feel. Like I managed to connect--always the writer's number-one goal. Thank you for your generous praise bb. ♥

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theswearingkind December 3 2010, 00:37:54 UTC
This is so beautiful. As always when it comes to your writing, words fail me. <3

Adam has fucked him open too. I gasped. Perfect.

Would you mind if I friend you? I feel cheated that this has existed for days without me knowing about it.

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silver_keynotes December 3 2010, 01:40:58 UTC
Thank you so much bb, and let's definitely be friends! <3

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