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I felt inspired during class today and wrote a snippet for my NaNo concept this year. It is meant as something that fits into the plot, not an actual passage from the novella.
...However, the rapid acceleration of intellectual development is not without its cost. Because of the large discrepancy between the intellectual and emotional states of being of a child receiving treatments from the Program, the likelihood of mental...disintegration significantly increases. Great care, therefore, should be taken to ensure the healthy development of each and every child involved in the Program. It is determined through thorough empirical scientific studies that administration of individual treatments during Stages One through Four should be separated by, at the minimum, eighteen (18) days if adverse effects are to be avoided.
You, however, have never been like the other children. We were, nevertheless, overzealous, and we paid dearly for it.
...However, the rapid acceleration of intellectual development is not without its cost. Because of the large discrepancy between the intellectual and emotional states of being of a child receiving treatments from the Program, the likelihood of mental...disintegration significantly increases. Great care, therefore, should be taken to ensure the healthy development of each and every child involved in the Program. It is determined through thorough empirical scientific studies that administration of individual treatments during Stages One through Four should be separated by, at the minimum, eighteen (18) days if adverse effects are to be avoided.
You, however, have never been like the other children. We were, nevertheless, overzealous, and we paid dearly for it.