This was really great and the ULTIMATE BEST LINE: Yasuda had stopped strumming, Hina's newspaper had fallen onto the ground and Dokkun immediately sat up to witness hell break loose. Yes, ALL HELL WOULD BREAK LOSE! I picture a whole mess of demons and flames arising from the floor and Yoko laughing maniacly...which would probably amuse Ryo. XD
I really love Uchi, but in this fic I kinda got upset with his act. And poor Yoko, besides not eating his purin, he discovered the culprit was just the missed one >__< There are parts of the story which really made me laugh a lot, such as the Ohkura with lazy smile, Yasu's delinquency, Hina's tsukkomis (plus Yoko's idea of persuading Hina *LOL*) and Ryo's poison tongue (won't add here because it'll be longer than already is *LOL*)!
And, this, I can imagine well: Subaru and Maru-chan came waltzing in, arms linked together and laughing at something that Yoko didn't really care about. XDD
The other members crowded around Dokkun and Uchi and began speaking above each other. "How are you?" "Yoko's a baka." "Do you miss us?" "Come over after work!" "Let's go for a drink." "Don't! Hina might kiss you!" "OI!" "Stop tsukkoming me!"
Eito + Uchi + Crack = the TRUE and the BEST Kanjani8!
Thank you so much for writing it! This totally made my day! =DD (and sorry if the comment was long -__-')
Yeah, I was surprised it turned out to be Uchi too. I just wrote with the flow and I ended up making him the culprit. Haha.
I'm glad parts of the story made you laugh because it was my intention to. This story was really full of crack now that I think about it. I tried to make it as realistic/unrealistic as I could.
Happy I made your day too ;) Haha. No, I should be thanking you for your input. <3
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I LOVE IT. UCHI'S THE CULPRIT.
YOKO JUMPING ON OHKURA IS SEXY.
<3
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Hahaha.
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This was really great and the ULTIMATE BEST LINE: Yasuda had stopped strumming, Hina's newspaper had fallen onto the ground and Dokkun immediately sat up to witness hell break loose. Yes, ALL HELL WOULD BREAK LOSE! I picture a whole mess of demons and flames arising from the floor and Yoko laughing maniacly...which would probably amuse Ryo. XD
Kanjani8 fic is loved, thanks for sharing!
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Thus making me leave you with KOKORO GA PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN
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When I rewrite this I'll make sure to include Yoko's maniac laughing. <3
You're welcome ;)
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There are parts of the story which really made me laugh a lot, such as the Ohkura with lazy smile, Yasu's delinquency, Hina's tsukkomis (plus Yoko's idea of persuading Hina *LOL*) and Ryo's poison tongue (won't add here because it'll be longer than already is *LOL*)!
And, this, I can imagine well: Subaru and Maru-chan came waltzing in, arms linked together and laughing at something that Yoko didn't really care about. XDD
The other members crowded around Dokkun and Uchi and began speaking above each other. "How are you?" "Yoko's a baka." "Do you miss us?" "Come over after work!" "Let's go for a drink." "Don't! Hina might kiss you!" "OI!" "Stop tsukkoming me!"
Eito + Uchi + Crack = the TRUE and the BEST Kanjani8!
Thank you so much for writing it! This totally made my day! =DD (and sorry if the comment was long -__-')
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I'm glad parts of the story made you laugh because it was my intention to. This story was really full of crack now that I think about it. I tried to make it as realistic/unrealistic as I could.
Happy I made your day too ;) Haha. No, I should be thanking you for your input. <3
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I kept laughing till the end! I love how much Yoko needs his purin. :3
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