Yoko's Purin Interrogation

Jul 03, 2010 02:43

Pairing Group: Kanjani8 + Uchi
Genre: Crack
Rating: G
Summary: Somebody's eaten Yoko's purin...uh-oh.

Yoko's Purin Interrogation )

je: `kanjani8, -- fanfiction: one-shot, je: yokoyama yu

Leave a comment

Comments 28

staticcflicker July 2 2010, 17:19:04 UTC
LOL HAPPY FIC!

I LOVE IT. UCHI'S THE CULPRIT.

YOKO JUMPING ON OHKURA IS SEXY.

<3

Reply

silver_kite July 3 2010, 01:03:45 UTC
That's because you want Yoko to jump you ;) lol <3

Reply

maichii February 4 2011, 15:56:32 UTC
your comment spoiled me. <3
Hahaha.

Reply


magicmag813 July 2 2010, 17:35:20 UTC
LOLZ, I love you. XD

This was really great and the ULTIMATE BEST LINE: Yasuda had stopped strumming, Hina's newspaper had fallen onto the ground and Dokkun immediately sat up to witness hell break loose. Yes, ALL HELL WOULD BREAK LOSE! I picture a whole mess of demons and flames arising from the floor and Yoko laughing maniacly...which would probably amuse Ryo. XD

Kanjani8 fic is loved, thanks for sharing!

Reply

magicmag813 July 2 2010, 17:37:20 UTC
Ohhh, and I like your comment thing (Paaaan)

Thus making me leave you with KOKORO GA PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN

Reply

silver_kite July 3 2010, 01:07:13 UTC
Haha. Thanks for reviewing :D I'm glad you liked that line :D

When I rewrite this I'll make sure to include Yoko's maniac laughing. <3

You're welcome ;)

Reply


chiefuku July 2 2010, 21:26:41 UTC
I really love Uchi, but in this fic I kinda got upset with his act. And poor Yoko, besides not eating his purin, he discovered the culprit was just the missed one >__<
There are parts of the story which really made me laugh a lot, such as the Ohkura with lazy smile, Yasu's delinquency, Hina's tsukkomis (plus Yoko's idea of persuading Hina *LOL*) and Ryo's poison tongue (won't add here because it'll be longer than already is *LOL*)!

And, this, I can imagine well: Subaru and Maru-chan came waltzing in, arms linked together and laughing at something that Yoko didn't really care about. XDD

The other members crowded around Dokkun and Uchi and began speaking above each other. "How are you?" "Yoko's a baka." "Do you miss us?" "Come over after work!" "Let's go for a drink." "Don't! Hina might kiss you!" "OI!" "Stop tsukkoming me!"

Eito + Uchi + Crack = the TRUE and the BEST Kanjani8!

Thank you so much for writing it! This totally made my day! =DD (and sorry if the comment was long -__-')

Reply

silver_kite July 3 2010, 01:10:51 UTC
Yeah, I was surprised it turned out to be Uchi too. I just wrote with the flow and I ended up making him the culprit. Haha.

I'm glad parts of the story made you laugh because it was my intention to. This story was really full of crack now that I think about it. I tried to make it as realistic/unrealistic as I could.

Happy I made your day too ;) Haha. No, I should be thanking you for your input. <3

Reply


hikarihina July 2 2010, 23:06:55 UTC
That was great!
I kept laughing till the end! I love how much Yoko needs his purin. :3

Reply

silver_kite July 3 2010, 01:07:59 UTC
:) Thanks for reading the story. Yoko always is passionate about his purin xD Haha.

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

silver_kite July 3 2010, 01:11:53 UTC
thanks for the comment, love <3 haha. you caught me in the middle of replying ;)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up