Hi! I loved it. I almost cry (yeah, it's not unusual cause I'm such a crybaby but this was so sad) reading this and I have to say to you that for now it could be one of the best stories I've ever read. It's not just that is fanfiction, this characters have their own personality and story and I love it. I think I'll add you to my FL if you don't mind :D Oh, good luck with your wisdom teeth! I'm expecting getting mine taken out since summer :( Thank you!
Your English is fine :) It is quite depressing, so it's understandable. I've added you ;) The operation's over. It's summer in a month where I am, so I wanted to get it out before the holidays. Haha.
So sad. I am glad that Johnny made it. I was scared that he wouldn't because he couldn't take it.
It is interesting to see that as much as Mac has a teasing side, he is like the father of the group who leads them when it comes down to important things.
I was thinking about if he would, but I didn't want it to be too dramatic not that it isn't already. Haha.
It was nice writing as Mac as the focus. The other two chps were both sad, sorta, so it was good writing Mac because he was a bit of comic relief. Thanks for commenting! <3
I really love the way the fic's progressing. It's like a roller coaster ride. I feel sorry for Johnny but at the same time I want him to get himself together because he has a daughter to look after. But the image of Toppo cuddling Kohana is so cute ^^ I'm usually a yokohina fan but I am loving Jacky x Ran :DDDD The 2nd last paragraph is just wonderful.
It is quite the roller coaster of emotions. Hopefully everything will settle down...eventually. Haha. Don't worry, Johnny will get it together. Heh. xD
YokoHina is usually the way to go. I ship them too, but I can't really write them together. And..I guess this story is semi-AU, so I wanted to introduce new characters...even there are so many already :O There's pros and cons about writing each new chapter using each main character xD
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I loved it. I almost cry (yeah, it's not unusual cause I'm such a crybaby but this was so sad) reading this and I have to say to you that for now it could be one of the best stories I've ever read. It's not just that is fanfiction, this characters have their own personality and story and I love it.
I think I'll add you to my FL if you don't mind :D
Oh, good luck with your wisdom teeth! I'm expecting getting mine taken out since summer :(
Thank you!
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Thanks for reading!
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Arggggggggghhh I hate it!!! Yoko should be with Hina go go go YokoHina *dies fangirling
But I LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even it was so sad... Hiks *sobbing
Please update soon, neeeeee ::hugs u tight until you cannot breathe::
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Thanks for the flashy 'LOVE' haha <3
Not sure when I'll update, but thanks for continuing to read this story :)
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Can't wait for the next.. T^T
I'm going to add you as friend if you don't mind..
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It is interesting to see that as much as Mac has a teasing side, he is like the father of the group who leads them when it comes down to important things.
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It was nice writing as Mac as the focus. The other two chps were both sad, sorta, so it was good writing Mac because he was a bit of comic relief. Thanks for commenting! <3
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I'm usually a yokohina fan but I am loving Jacky x Ran :DDDD
The 2nd last paragraph is just wonderful.
I'll add you as a friend if you don't mind :)
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YokoHina is usually the way to go. I ship them too, but I can't really write them together. And..I guess this story is semi-AU, so I wanted to introduce new characters...even there are so many already :O There's pros and cons about writing each new chapter using each main character xD
Added you back ;) Thanks for reading!
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