Comments | silver_raven: Smile, Part 1

silver_raven

Mar 13, 2010 16:31

( Not for those under 18 - Otherwise, Enjoy! )

Comments 4

venus_fiction March 14 2010, 16:57:36 UTC

Great story!

I loved the emotion in it, Carlisle's need to be around Bella. It was very well written. :) Good characterization!

silver_raven April 23 2010, 02:34:22 UTC

thanks so much :)

teisha_marie March 15 2010, 06:04:13 UTC

Holy shit. That was absolutely fantastic! Completely blown away!

silver_raven April 23 2010, 02:33:54 UTC

thank you :)