Have I told you just how much I love your poems? This one, though, is exceptionally beautiful. And this is my fave stanza:
Tell me no stories and I'll tell you no lies. No one wants to hurt me, but everybody tries... Then they succeed and I'm left in pain. Someday the universe will let my happiness rain.
Thank you so much for posting, little poet, although I always hope that you're not half as sad and lonely as the poems seem to whisper.
Aw! Thank you!!!! I'm glad you like them. ^____^ Well, it's just... the universe controls relationships, so I believe that the universe is on pms! So, I'm only a lil' sad for the moment. Happy on the outside, sad on the inside. *shrugs* I try my best not to let my pessimistic side take over me. You know? Thanks for telling me what ya think of it. Hehe. ^_^ Hope everything is doing good in your life, and stays that way!!!
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Tell me no stories and I'll tell you no lies.
No one wants to hurt me, but everybody tries...
Then they succeed and I'm left in pain.
Someday the universe will let my happiness rain.
Thank you so much for posting, little poet, although I always hope that you're not half as sad and lonely as the poems seem to whisper.
Much love,
Night
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Love ya hun,
Silver~
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