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a i [For Hazelandnuts] - Part 6

Feb 24, 2011 17:54

AUTHOR: Everlind
RECIPIENT: hazelandnuts

Title: a i
Rating: PG-15
Word Count: 50 600+
Warning/s: Drama, very mild gore, questionable ethical issues, attempts at humor, hopefully not too much OOCness. Oshitari. Kite (and his tight purple pants).
Summary: 'Can you make a robot love a human? But isn't the question: can you make a human love a robot?' (A.I. Artificial ( Read more... )

!2010, !round 2

Comments 10

ms_worplesdon February 25 2011, 01:05:06 UTC

OH THANK GOD THERE'S MORE. Gonna read now.

ms_worplesdon February 25 2011, 01:31:45 UTC

Gosh! You leave so much to the imagination and this entire section is lush and lovely. I adore how you write moisture of all kinds. ♥

everlind February 25 2011, 19:38:36 UTC

I had watched Totoro just then. That's why it's so... vibrant. And yes, somehow Tororo + Prince of Tennis Silver Pair sci-fi AU makes sense in my head.

Thanks for al the support ♥

ms_worplesdon February 25 2011, 19:43:35 UTC

LOL That's awesome. I was just looking for Totoro hand towels!

♥

everlind February 25 2011, 20:08:02 UTC

*fistbumps*

Totoro is seriously awesome ♥ (hand towels! GRAH *____*)

Thread 5

sac527 February 25 2011, 08:35:44 UTC

"There's a lot of junk in it, possibly misplaced by the mailman"
::snickers::

And here I thought we wouldn't get any sexxors with that PG-15 rating. Fufufufu! The buildup and placement felt well-timed.

I have more comments, but we're so close to the end I'll wait!

everlind February 25 2011, 19:41:42 UTC

It was very tame sexxors, non? I tried to keep it as vague as I could and not to mention and no-no's, but still mostly let the message of the... well, love get through (whoa, cheesy much?)

which is near!

didop February 26 2011, 01:59:00 UTC

This story is so beautiful <3
the betrayal/shut down scene in the last installment had me in tears, and the following UST a delight to read xD I'm really loving all the moonlit scenes too :)

THIS PART ♥
oh god the image of shishido smiling happily over his kissed hand asfghdfh so adorable and choutarou walking into the kitchen just to kiss his forehead dahh ♥♥♥

Seriously everything in this fic is amazing, and apologies I can't muster up better reviews; I just adore this fic to bits <333 Can't wait to read more~~~ but almost wishing it'd never end, too, hahah

everlind March 21 2011, 19:21:10 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

I am so glad you enjoyed this part, there were so many scenes in it I loved writing. UST is a guilty pleasure of mine, even though I do write them in an established relationship a lot.

There lovey-dovey dorks, that's what they are ;)

The review was wonderful, no apologies needed at all. Matter of fact, thank you so much for this comment, it means a lot to get such feedback on my drabblings ♥