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a i [For Hazelandnuts] - Part 7

Mar 03, 2011 15:53

AUTHOR: Everlind
RECIPIENT: hazelandnuts

Title: a i
Rating: PG-15
Word Count: 50 600+
Warning/s: Drama, very mild gore, questionable ethical issues, attempts at humor, hopefully not too much OOCness. Oshitari. Kite (and his tight purple pants).
Summary: 'Can you make a robot love a human? But isn't the question: can you make a human love a robot?' (A.I. Artificial ( Read more... )

!2010, !round 2

Comments 21

sac527 March 3 2011, 23:14:13 UTC

Yay, perfect timing! I have something to read during my flight! I'll send a full review soon.

everlind March 21 2011, 19:22:10 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

I hope it was worthwhile ♥

oriaon March 3 2011, 23:52:22 UTC

Wow.
Just... wow.
I'm shaking right now. From fear, excitement, tension, relief, everything.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, very, very much so. The plot, the characterization, and especially the pacing makes this one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I could envision everything so vividly when reading, as if experiencing a dream, all the while with my heart pounding and breath held.

I love this.

You truly are a master writer.

everlind March 21 2011, 19:24:41 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :D :D :D

♥♥♥

Glad you liked it so much to experience such a slew of emotions! Writing this story was a wild ride, but one during which I learned a lot. It turned out being very personal and dear to me, so I am very happy that is is received well.

Thank you for that amazingly kind parting-line (of which I am not deserving) ♥

ms_worplesdon March 4 2011, 03:14:18 UTC

HOLY. SHIT.

everlind March 21 2011, 19:25:17 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

THANK. YOU.

;)

♥

hazelandnuts March 4 2011, 04:15:07 UTC

i can't words right now brb head broke from amazing

everlind March 21 2011, 19:27:49 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

*huge grin of d00m*

Head okay now? Need I massage your temples? ;)

Thank you for tossing that prompt in your request. While I admit to experiencing serious mental breakdowns over the course of the first week, it was the best thing ever. I needed that. Writing this story was a serious kick, however strange that might sound, I am so happy I got assigned to you ♥

shadowetienne March 4 2011, 08:41:03 UTC

I loved this from start to finish. I am a total science fiction nerd, and you handled this amazingly well. I really love your Shishido in this especially. Though you did something spectacular in managing to actually make me like Oshitari. Overall, I found it heartbreaking and wonderful and just emotionally spot on.

Also, androids. Androids are awesome. Choutarou as an android is somehow especially awesome. So is Eiji as an android.

And Oishi. I was hoping that somehow Oishi or Oshitari had managed to make things work out, and then Oishi did, and he is amazing.

Thank you for writing this, it is amazing.

Etienne

everlind March 21 2011, 19:33:07 UTC

(SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY *made of fail*)

Thank you. Very very much. I am relieved that you pointed out that you're into science fiction. I'm not (besides Star Wars, heh) so this came as the biggest challenge me and my big mouth could've ever asked for.
I am glad I managed to warm you up to Oshitari, when I first picked hyotei as my 'home team', Yuushi was at the bottom of the list. But as I wrote him, I started to like him and finally adore him. I guess the bastard just takes some time to get 'warmed up' to :)

Choutarou was the obvious choice to play the metal man part (because I have this certain way of interpreting his personality that made him becoming human unfurl wonderfully. Shishido isn't as subtle and might've been too loud and volatile), even though scientist!Shishido kinda wrung in my head a bit.

Oishi wins.

Thank you for reading and commenting.