Aperture (Chapter 3)

[silverdoll14]

Title: Aperture
Pairing: Sakumoto, Ohmiya, Sho/??, Sho/OC
Rating: NC17
Chapter - Word Count: Chapter 3 - 6 070 words
Genre: AU, Angst, Drama, Family, Fluff, Kid, Romance
Summary: "Did you hate me when I didn't fight for you before?" Sho asked before it was too late. The other man paused and then turned to look back at him. The other looked up,

Comments

[miyamoriyoh]

honestly, I'm curious too who the ??? would be. I have no idea, lol. waiting for the surprise.
Man, this part is heart breaking especially when they both confess their true feelings :'( sobssssss
Aiba-shi..... are you the brother of the wife? the neighbor? or the therapist? I seriously have no idea.
and about the mpreg....perhaps? maybe they'll feel complete once they have their own child, but no kids is fine too.

so many things I'm curious about and love this sakumoto plot! can't wait for the other chapters :D

PS. I was listening to Adele's All I Ask and it hit me right in the feels. also perfectly sums this chapter up.
Play the song as you read for maximum tear effect T_T

[silverdoll14]

Well, I could assure you it's someone who entered the scene already... I think Chapter 6 would reveal it. Nurufufufufu~~~

I know right? Now I'm asking myself why I wrote it, but it has to be done.

Thanks for reading dear. I'll do my best! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!

[learashi]

You really are too cruel. I started tearing up at about the time they were in the hammock and am still a bit sniffly as I type this. The second half was so good (thank goodness you only sent sent me the first half previously or I would be crying twice.) Don't worry, I enjoy the pain though.

I sort of see Aiba as possibly being some sort of therapist? I'm not getting an old boyfriend vibe from him. I could be completely wrong though. It's just that Sho is still saying that he is married when he's been divorced for quite a long time and giving up Jun for a wife that doesn't exist, so it seems that Sho is a bit disturbed.

You know that I have previously encouraged you to go for mpreg and still feel that you should go that way (purely for selfish reasons) but if you are not comfortable with that then don't (but I hope that you still can - see selfish thoughts strike again).

[silverdoll14]

Please don't condemn me. Sadly it has to be done. Don't worry, I can assure you it's happy ending... So hang in there. :3

Wow, that's an interesting assumption... Don't worry, things will be revealed in due time... (perhaps Chapter 5)

I don't have problems with Mpreg honestly... I just don't know whether I can execute it... But I'll try. Either ways, I'll do my best!

Thanks for reading dear. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!

[mcfib29]

Tears fell from my eyes, the moment Jun said "Thank you". I can feel Jun is hurting since he decided already to let Sho go even he asked that 3 days to be w/ him & let Sho to decide. It was heartbreaking for the both of them since they're in love with each other but have to part ways. (Im not angry with Sho anymore lol) I wonder who Aiba is, Sho was surprised seeing him. Sho/???- his ex-wife or another lover, hhhhmmmmmm i dont have names in mind :-) About mpreg you know what i want already, I really want to see Jun pregnant & have a Sakumoto child hahaha. Looking forward for the next chapter my dear. Otsukare!!!!

[silverdoll14]

Nope, Sho and his ex-wife is paired as Sho/OC. Sho/?? is a different pairing... Nurufufufufu~~~

Hahaha~~~ I'm honestly persuaded now... like seriously~~~ *thumbs up*

Thanks for reading dear. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!

[hsiahsirafzi]

woah i liked this. i guess aiba san is sho's wife's brother. hahaha but it could be someone else also right. hmm i really can't wait for the next chapter. what actually sho wanted to tell jun and i wonder if jun's thought is right. hmmm i'm really curious. well if it is me mpreg sounds interesting but i think it depends on you wether mpreg goes with the story or not. thank you for writing i'm looking forward to next chapter

[silverdoll14]

Woah~~~ you're quite close dear... You'll know soon enough Xd...

Well, mpreg or not goes with the story... XD

Thanks for reading dear. Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!

[raene_9]

bittersweet for both of them...and it was pure pain when Jun smiled at Sho and said thank you... :'(
Aiba, maybe Sho's close friend or wife's relative!?
Probably Jun is pregnant - he's been a sleepyhead before they went for a trip. if ever Jun is pregnant, i think he wont use it to let Sho stay with him.
Happy New Year!

[silverdoll14]

*suddenly sings Bittersweet* I'm actually implicated when I wrote that. Damn! nurufufufufufu~~~

Mah ne, you're quite close...

Well, that could be arrange. hahahaha~~~

Thanks for reading dear. Happy New Year! Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!