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Aperture (Chapter 7)

Feb 01, 2016 12:22

Title: Aperture
Pairing: Sakumoto, Ohmiya, Sakumiya (past), Sho/OC (past)
Rating: NC17
Chapter - Word Count: Chapter 7 - 4 908 words
Genre: AU, Angst, Drama, Family, Fluff, Kid, Romance
Summary: "Did you hate me when I didn't fight for you before?" Sho asked before it was too late. The other man paused and then turned to look back at him. The ( Read more... )

pair: sakumiya, r: nc-17, pair: ohmiya, chapt: aperture, pair: sakumoto, length: series

Comments 18

akhikaru February 1 2016, 05:08:15 UTC

:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
/sorry, I really can't get over the last part xDDD/
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamnnnn!!! :S
Liked the flashbacks btw, great job~ :D :D
Will be waiting for the next one~ ;)

silverdoll14 February 1 2016, 22:57:23 UTC

I can't get over that part too. TT^TT

Thank you very much!!! Will be writing the next one then. XD nurufufufuu~

hatorisachiyo22 February 1 2016, 07:04:58 UTC

Love this chapter!! 💕

But I hope sho didn't blurt out the word Nino out loud. Please no.

silverdoll14 February 1 2016, 22:58:24 UTC

Well, we can't be sure... I mean Sho is mostly unconscious by that time.

Thanks for reading! XD

learashi February 1 2016, 07:28:02 UTC

Please tell me that he didn't actually say that. Hasn't Jun been put through enough?
Oh, and the sexy times were super good.

silverdoll14 February 1 2016, 22:59:36 UTC

I know right.... why am I making Jun suffer again? OTL
Well, that's the part I was able to write easily. Guess I was in the mood.

Thanks for reading! XD

bambichesuto February 1 2016, 07:31:41 UTC

did sho said "nino" out loud?? can't wait to see the hurtful jun in the next chapter. Will be waiting for the next chapter

silverdoll14 February 4 2016, 05:10:47 UTC

Oh my god! I was so sure I replied this before... OTL

Mah ne... there's the next chapter for that... Nurufufufufu~~~

Thanks for reading! XD

raene_9 February 1 2016, 08:19:44 UTC

got mixed emotions with this chap...but whew! the last part was hot! i hope that Sho didn't say it out loud that can tear Jun apart. i got a feeling that Sho will be waking up alone in his bed if Jun heard the name Sho blurted out before he surrender to sleep...patiently waiting for the next chap

silverdoll14 February 1 2016, 23:00:29 UTC

Mah, who knows. Sho is slipping out of consciousness after all.

Jyah, then I'll try my best to finish it as soon as possible. XD

Thanks for reading! XD