Fanfic: Stepping Stone (Shuuhei/Kira)

Nov 10, 2008 19:56

My other fics on this pairing: Pieces | Breathing With Him, In Time | Etched | Utterly Spoiled | All Along | Sense of Normalcy | Feverish Burning | Divide | 12 Drabbles | Heartbeat

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, antha_aryn!!!ILU SO MUCH ♥♥ You are an awesome friend and an amazing co-mod, I'm so glad to have met you through our ShuuKira lurve and squeeage. We need to ( Read more... )

fanfic, hisagi/kira, bleach

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chibi_zoe November 10 2008, 10:41:49 UTC
Very nice - I like that they're like seven little stories yet still tell a cohesive tale(and such a wonderful tale at that) *love*

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silverharmony November 11 2008, 01:45:31 UTC
Aww thanks. The structure kinda just came to me because I wanted to explore all the different facets of their relationship ... in a way it half-feels like writing a fairytale (since fairytales always use a lot of 3s and 7s for everything) XD

I'm grateful for you taking the time out to read and give me feedback, thank you :D

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ceestar November 10 2008, 12:09:49 UTC
Oooh I think you've just made me fall in love with this pairing all over again...
The way you just kind of... filled in little gaps of their already adorable canon relationship just made this fic so...fulfilling! (I hope that's the right word)

Well it was beautiful, great and an absolute pleasure to read!

"The enemy in front of you" was my favourite~
I think it's because I'm a bit of a sucker for...angst... that's weird.

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silverharmony November 11 2008, 01:51:03 UTC
Haha I'm a sucker for angst myself, so it's okay XD In fact, I normally primarily write angst ... it was good to write happier stuff like this (and I wanted to give Antha lots of happytime 8D) ~

Thank you! I'm always pretty strict on myself about canon-ness, so I love working off canon and, as you said, filling in some gaps. :D It makes me so happy and relieved to hear that you found it a fulfilling read, you flatter me <333

And thank you for reading and giving me your feedback! ♥

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effluency November 10 2008, 12:20:33 UTC
rgejgrejgher

ShuuKira that sticks to the plot = love on soooo many levels.

You win.

AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANTHA. I'M PRETTY SURE I DID THIS LAST YEAR, TOO, AND EVEN THOUGH YOU'LL PROBABLY NEVER SEE IT HIDDEN IN A COMMENT HERE IT IS.

(Oh, shit, I keep forgetting - this really is yakunitatanai. I decided to switch LJ's~!)

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antha_aryn November 10 2008, 13:27:47 UTC
THANK YOU for the birthday wishes, yakunitatanai!!!!!! ♥

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effluency November 11 2008, 23:00:58 UTC
YOU IS WELCOME~~

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silverharmony November 11 2008, 01:42:26 UTC
Oooh, nice username change! And where have you been? ;D We all miss your ShuuKira goodness ~

Thank you so much, I tend to be such a canon whore that sticking to the plot often ends up being my business XD I'm happy to hear that you approve!

I appreciate you reading and giving me your opinion, thank you! <33

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antha_aryn November 10 2008, 13:30:14 UTC
Oooooh You know, even if you rusted to the point you turned into dust, you would still be the definition of awesome in every language and dialect this world has to offer! <3

There are so many things I like about this fic, I don't even know where to start! My ultimate favorite part was when Kira said "So please...look for me." I ALMOST CRIED!!!!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS!!!!!!!!!!! I ♥ YOU GUYS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME INDEED! THANK YOU!

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silverharmony November 11 2008, 01:39:35 UTC
ANTHA ILUUU ♥♥ you flatter me too much :'( *clings* I was afraid you'd be a bit >_> reading this actually ... I'm so rusty that I felt like total epic fail posting it xDDD If only my brain power hadn't been so drained by too much slave labor assignmenting from class, I really wish I could've done better for you, you deserve it sooooo so much <33333

Again, I want to thank you for being my ShuuKira buddy all this time, being patient with me and being such a wonderful modly being with me, you have no idea how happy and grateful I am to have met you ~

I ♥ YOU MOAR TO THE POWER OF INFINITY HUNNEH XD *HUGSQUISH*

Let's do something for Christmas again? 8D

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antha_aryn November 12 2008, 09:35:09 UTC
Pffffft Is true, you is awesome, rusty or not! You are a goddess! ::loves::

Am also really, really, really glad I met you. To think it was only through that batch of ShuuKira I made ages ago! IS DESTINY, BIZATCHES!!!!!!! ♥

And and and and YES PLEASE (to the christmas thing)! WHAT DO YOU GOTS IN MIND?!?!?!?!?!?!

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silverharmony November 12 2008, 18:03:09 UTC
As are you, dearest *loves back* and destiny indeed!! We have such an awesome comm now >:D Didn't think we'd get so many members. Yay for our baby ~

Re Christmas: another Secret-Santa-type exchange? ;) I'll be somewhat busy during the December period and don't know whether I'll have the time (or brain juices) to write up another fic, so I'm happy to do the same organizing stuff that I did last year (and if I'm the one who organizes that means you can participate in it)...?

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letainajup November 12 2008, 22:51:13 UTC
*sniffles* I really do luv your writings ;__; I like how you made this into sequence of their timeline together - like from the academy days to the war going on now!

I don't know why I really do like the part when it talked about the shades of grey not being their and it being black and white like their uniforms...powerful stuff!

Again amazing work, you're awesome!!!

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silverharmony November 13 2008, 00:43:43 UTC
You're so sweet ~ <333 lol I've done that timeline thing once before eh? xD This was more an exploration on the progression of their relationship, as senpai/kouhai, friends, kindred spirits, lovers etc. and I guess it ended up falling naturally into a working timeline :P

And thank you so much for your kind compliments! I really appreciate you taking the time out to read and give me your opinion ♥

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