Comments | silverharmony: Completed Drabble Requests: 7 Drabbles

silverharmony

Completed Drabble Requests: 7 Drabbles

Feb 06, 2009 01:41

So, here are all the drabbles that were requested, finally. They all kind of turned into ficlets lol @_@;; I was aiming for about 300 words but they all ended up averaging at about 500-700 words each haha. Guess I got carried away ( Read more... )

fanfic, prince of tennis, gintama, reborn, eyeshield 21, gundam 00

Comments 53

agentlerain February 6 2009, 02:36:30 UTC

IFAIL. I only saw the KHR stories but didn't see the lovely Prince of Tennis story. :3 :3

The only things I'd crit about that little one-shot is Ryoma using the word 'reprimanded' which is a bit :S for me. Since uh, since he doesn't really use fancy words. And the use of Kunimitsu instead of Tezuka, just because I'm so used to how they refer to him in the animanga that way.

But otherwise, there are small details like "the fire in his eyes", "control the shuttlecock properly if the feathers are all soaked?" and just the use of badminton! :P I'm a fan of both sports but haha, Ryoma does fail in trying to use tennis skills for baddy. :P

Will you write more TezRyo in the future? :3 I'd love to see more.

silverharmony February 6 2009, 03:28:34 UTC

Ah, honest crit. Thank you :D It's been a while since I wrote so I know I'm pretty rusty at the moment.

Reprimanded has been changed, thanks for pointing that out; I was proofreading these ficlets at like 2am so I didn't catch that one, but you're absolutely right. ;D

However, with the use of Tezuka's first name ... that's actually necessary because the drabble is in his point of view, and people don't usually refer to themselves by their last name. XD That's why I also used "Echizen", even though I'm much more used to "Ryoma". It's the same reason why I used "Hayato" in the first KHR drabble, but "Gokudera" in the second one. ♥

Thank you so much!! And lol I'm more of an EijiRyo shipper myself, I was just completing requests made by people from my flist, but I do have a fair few TezuRyo friends in my flist so you never know - I might just write the pairing again ;D

agentlerain February 6 2009, 04:09:00 UTC

Haha, okay. You got me with the point-of-view. I wasn't taking that in as much and was just staring at 'Kunimitsu' with horror. (Have you seen the English versions of the manga? They use Kunimitsu too and it's like D: D: They only use Tezuka or Buchou. They rarely use Kunimitsu if at all.)

It worked in the KHR drabbles because Bianchi at least, uses Hayato, if I remember correctly. And other people calling him Hayato is just :3 :3 - he lets them use his first name. :3

I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS! katgi February 6 2009, 03:29:03 UTC

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I am so glad I requested <3333 HiruSena, I love you so. And man, I love the Gin/Shin and GokuTsuna one (this one made me cry ;A; Oh Gokudera...)

<3333

Re: I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS! silverharmony February 6 2009, 03:46:55 UTC

You know, there were pairings I generally liked and pairings I didn't ship that were requested ... but your request was the only one out of the ficlets that actually featured my OTP from a fandom ;D so I'm so glad you requested, too! HiruSena is love <333

I'm happy to hear you liked the GinShin and 5927 too ~ ♥ thanks so much for your feedback, I'm relieved and happy to hear you enjoyed it ^_^

*Hugglesquishes*

obsessive_a101 February 6 2009, 06:13:36 UTC

Guh. Love the TezuRyo fic.

And I really need to start watching that series [KHR]. I've heard so many [good] things about it. Hmm... maybe I have time... after it is completed.

silverharmony February 6 2009, 06:28:18 UTC

Thank you, I was afraid it was gonna be epic fail so I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it! :D

And yes you should totally get into KHR *___* It's really awesome. Though it might not be completed for a while yet. ♥ XD

bubblefire February 6 2009, 10:04:48 UTC

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THANK YOU SO MUCH

it was soooo good, you make my inner fangirl so pleased! she hasn't be satisfied in so long, it was brilliant! you got it all in character and and it nearly made me cry like OMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH HARMONNNNNYYY <333

silverharmony February 6 2009, 14:22:55 UTC

asfasdahsklhalsdls *sags in relief*

You have no idea how relieved I am to hear you say that <33333 out of all the drabble requests in this entry, I found that yours was the hardest to write (for some reason). So I was kind of embarrassed to post it up. XDDD

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BACK BUBBLE!!!!!!!! ♥♥ *clings* I'm so sad about not being able to see you at Christie's party today ~ <33

bubblefire February 7 2009, 14:43:40 UTC

ahh sorry for giving you the hardest characters to work with, its such a weird pairing, i should of given you something easier to work with DDD: you shouldn't be embarrased, it was really good <33 so happy!

<33333 me too i'm really sad that i couldn't come ;___; but i hope that you have lots of fun <33 you coming to the v-day meet? 8D

silverharmony February 7 2009, 15:08:42 UTC

Oooh no it's not the characters, I think it's quite easy to characterize Setsuna and Nena actually (Setsuna's the stony kinda guy, and Nena's cheerful and mischievous) - I think it's partly because G00 has such a deep, complex and dense storyline. So it was very challenging to effectively weave my fic into canon XD but thanks so much, it was a good experience!

Hope you had fun with your family party thing too? :D And I sure am coming to V-Day! See you there my bubblecakes ♥♥

sinnatious February 6 2009, 11:06:05 UTC

Oh wow! What a great collection of ficlets! *___*

I enjoyed the HiruSena one, simply because Hiruma is just so... alsfkjasfdlkj HIRUMA. And the TezukaRyoma one was both sweet and made me chuckle, especially at the end. The Gintama one - oh god, Gintama is so hard to write, but you captured it so well and Gin was so in character and I giggled all throughout. And the GokuderaTsuna one... ;_____; You made it so heavy, so tragic, with so few words.

This was sort of like going to one of those self-serve takeaway places. A little bit of everything from all of my favourite fandoms! ^__^ Hopefully you'll write more in the future?! *__*

silverharmony February 7 2009, 03:26:05 UTC

Wow that's amazing that you read most of them XDD I'm really happy and relieved to hear that my characterization, humor and angst work for you! I'm happy to have been your self-serve takeaway place ♥ I'll definitely be writing more in future, as long as I can overcome this writer's block haha.

And sorry for stalking your profile, but zomg ♥ You're a fellow 1827 fan, Bleach and IchiHitsu fan, and HiruSena fan, and Gundam 00 fan, not to mention you're a fellow Australian too *waves to you from down south in Sydney*!! Wanna be friends? ♥

sinnatious February 7 2009, 04:17:11 UTC

Our interests are in alignment! OMG yes! \o/ I must friend you and stalk your future writings!

Writer's block is so unpleasant. Fingers crossed you overcome it. And good luck in the horrible Sydney heat you guys are suffering at the moment! *waves from surprisingly temperate Brisbane*