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Jul 19, 2009 21:41

Title: Paper Heart
Length: One-shot
Genre: Angst
Summary: Jaejoong's spending his first birthday in 3 years w/o Yunho, & he's still getting over it. When he resolutes to be strong & forget about it, Yunho messages him & call him up. Will he get swayed again?
A/N: dedicated to ernieduckie  who gave the prompt 'paper'! <3 Sorry for the delay, hun. Anyway, I'll try ( Read more... )

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ae_yeon July 20 2009, 16:08:23 UTC
A sweet sequel demanded!
There must be some gd reason Yun have for leaving Jae...
Though Yun should be more apologetic in the 1st place~

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silverlaces July 23 2009, 11:46:04 UTC
You're right! If yun wants forgiveness, he should be more apologetic & sincere, right right? :D I shall slap yunho a million times if he doesn't. Heehee, I'm considering writing a sequel, thank you for the suggestion! ^^

Thanks for reading & commenting, dear! Means alot to me :)

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harkk July 22 2009, 13:54:47 UTC
i'm skeptical skeptical skeptical, about yunho's apology. /: /gets bricked by yunjae fans. idk, i just thought that if he really loves jaejoong so dearly, why did he leave in the first place? what's more, he knows that his departure and the breakup would break jaejoong's heart yet after all this, he still had the audacity to call jaejoong up and ask for forgiveness, tell him that he missed him? and on jaejoong's birthday too, right when he knew that jae would be all alone and thinking about him. like he knew that this moment would be jae at his weakest. /:

still, this was truly with all honesty beautifully written. the way you described jaejoong's feelings was just pure asjkdfgh ♥. it's a never ending self reassurance and delusion, scribbling and crossing out and scribbling and crossing out again, it's a cycle that never stops when one's heart yearns for the other. guuh what have you done to me. D:

love you like always deaaaaar. <3

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silverlaces July 23 2009, 15:36:25 UTC
Yes hark! You're absolutely right ;) I was trying to make Yunho a total jerk in here, because he's such an asshole for leaving Jaejoong & then calling him when he's obviously at his weakest. But if I uh write a sequel, I might tweak that bit into a less qianbian Yunho. Just so it can be a positive ending, if I don't feel angsty while writing.

Gah, I miss you so much. Where have you gone.

'Where'd you go, I'd miss you so...seems like it's been forever, that you've been gone...pls come back homee homee homeee' -echoes into the distance

love you plenty plenty ms hark. ♥♥♥♥♥& i know jongkey's your guilty pleasure. p.s: where do you spot things about them, man! stalk their vids? :)

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harkk July 23 2009, 15:57:35 UTC
make yunho as qianbian! then let jaejoong and siwon be together or something. qianbian yunho deserves some punishment. /nods. (or maybe he can join yoosu. ot3! XDD)

i haven't been writing lately, how how how? D: prompt me pwease?

i miss you more you idiot. and harkhui has gone studying, for her teachers have deemed her stupid. ;_;

p.s
i read jongkey. i swear the jongkey fandom has wonderful writers. *_*

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jaejoongxyuno07 December 19 2009, 19:02:44 UTC
OMG.
SO HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL

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