Remembering To Breathe - Chapter 10

Oct 11, 2006 23:28

September spawned a monster... it is begun and I cannot stop it!! Agghhhh!!!! *sadie falls to the floor foaming at the mouth ( Read more... )

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starswan October 13 2006, 05:59:04 UTC
Morrissey! *splutters*

Teehee. I liked this chapter a bit especially the ending.

...but is that all??

We shall see XD

Please tell me you are kidding.You can't possibly consider ending it there!:P

“As you wish, my Lord,”

This line made my brain snap to The Princess Bride.

“Actually…” Lord Cain declared in a voice like breaking ice. “I think you’ve both had quite enough!”

This is a vivid description. I was trying to imagine what that would sound like. Images of Cle freezing his pervy ass off once the thin ice he is treading on breaks are amusing me. Though...I do like Cle in some respects.
So is Cain indignant because they are representing he and Riff scandalously or because he is sort of bitter that he and Riff are not getting as much time alone to do the nasty as their would be imposters? XD

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silverlinepark October 14 2006, 20:38:07 UTC
>>So is Cain indignant because they are representing he and Riff scandalously or because he is sort of bitter that he and Riff are not getting as much time alone to do the nasty as their would be imposters? XD<<

The answer to that is "probably both!"

I thought it would be good to show a steelier side to our little lord just for once, as we get closer to the end. I've been tangled with other things this week, together with the ongoing battle to get online. The next chapter is written but not typed up and the one after that will hopefully be the last, when they finally get it on... or not?

We shall see! *heehee*

x.Sadie

Viva Moz!

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dreamsincyanide October 14 2006, 03:05:01 UTC
"If I might make a suggestion? We should visit the source of these rumours forthwith and nip them smartly in the bud.”

‘Or kick them repeatedly in the balls until they cry for their mothers!’

This is possibly my favorite fanfic-Riff line. Ever. The idea of him saying or thinking that made me snort my pepsi.

And I can only imagine the thoughts going through the two maids's minds. XD

"But we just saw those two in the parlor, fucking like rabbits!"
"Maybe they reproduced like rabbits?"
"That was fast."

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silverlinepark October 14 2006, 20:41:13 UTC
>>And I can only imagine the thoughts going through the two maids's minds. XD

"But we just saw those two in the parlor, fucking like rabbits!"
"Maybe they reproduced like rabbits?"
"That was fast."<<

That would make a lovely illustration. *hint*

As would the darkening look on Riff's face as he contemplated his chance at revenge. I like Riff more and more every time I play with him. He's such good fun! *chuckles*

Glad u liked it.

xx.S

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eloquencelost October 24 2006, 08:39:17 UTC
Ohhhh. So I had no idea you'd contnued this beyond the first few chapters. Then Zan mentioned you had while at Onicon this weekend so of course I had to catch up on the next five chapters or so. >_> I'll be honest, I think Clehadol is a wee bit OOC here. But he's such a slippery bastard that it's impossible to get his characterization 100% down and for another thing, him obsessing over molesting Cain is a little hot. He's creepily fixiated ( ... )

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silverlinepark October 25 2006, 00:15:31 UTC
I'm just happy that people seem to be enjoying the story. I do like telling stories (even smutty ones!!) *LOL*

(ESPECIALLY smutty ones!!!) *mwahahah*

I will give thought to the Jez/Cassian idea, but I'm trying to finish the Rayne Wilde novella I am writing on Literotica so it might be around Xmas sometime. *grin*

Zan sent me some lovely/dirty *slurp* illustrations for RtB which have been very inspiring. I posted another Chapter (11) tonite but I think that c.12 might be the last as I have a few other stories to work on.

In the meantime I'm happy to check out anything you want me to have a look at. As I said before, I like your style of writing but if there's anything you want a second opinion on then you can contact me at my back-up yahoo mail address sadie_rose_69@yahoo.co.uk

Hope you enjoyed yourself at Onicon (I thought it had been a bit quiet around here! That's where everyone was!!) *grin* I'm very jealous, we don't often get anything that big around our way!

xx.Sadie

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dreamsincyanide October 25 2006, 02:15:42 UTC
I *am* still working on the preliminary drawings, in case you're wondering. nn; It's somewhat slow going because of work and school. It's mid-terms right now so I'm studying hard (while I'm not attending conventions in Houston and getting next to no sleep ;D). Needless to say I don't have a whoooole lot of free time.

Speaking of the con. . . I hope to get my hands on our cosplay pictures sometime soon. The ones taken with my disposable camera turned out. . eeh. . .a little bit off center? D: We did a Godchild photoshoot but I left my digital at home (I'm a ditz. It was sitting right next to the computer by the door and I walked off without it!) so I had to improvise. I may just put my costume on again in the next few days and take some solo pictures to post up in the community.

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silverlinepark October 25 2006, 19:43:02 UTC
I can sympathise with the lack of time! Shame about the lack of digital pix but I look forward to the reworking. I do like to dress up. I have a kimono, a katana and a long ginger pony tail and keep threatening to pose for a Rurouni Kenshin cospic but it hasn't materialised yet! *grin*

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