REMEMBERING TO BREATHE - PART THE LAST!

[silverlinepark]

Yes people, the day has come. The lastmost and final part of RtB has landed. I'm totally astounded that this has gotten written so quickly but now I really must go back and finish the (smutfest) epic that is A Boy Who... It's been astoundingly good fun to write tho. I hope that it's been as much fun to read and this final rendition provides *coff*

Comments

[pugsley]

OMG I have read some hot love scenes before but my dear I truly needed a very very cold shower to cool down from that one!! *falls into sex craved coma*

Wow that was extremely intense and I am very glad that they finally were able to make love or what they really had was hot, passionate, very steamy and jaw-dropping sex!! I think Riff has quite a lot more to teach our wonderful Earl though.

I was surprised that Clehadault was not hiding some where in the apartment watching and listening to these two get it on, or was he?

Thank you for sharing and I hope you feel the need to bless us again with another wonderful story!!

*whoops*

[starswan]

What minute, florid descriptions! :D

I nearly felt sort of pervy/voyeuristic reading it. XD

Nice!

*bookmarking and reading many times*

And excellent song. :O
That is one of my favorite Morrissey songs.
I wonder if he ever wrote about people with September birthdays >_>;;

Re: *whoops*

[silverlinepark]

Glad you enjoyed it guys, I'm totally exhausted now and think I'm going to have to go and lie down for a very long time. I did consider hiding Cle behind the curtains but it might have been an incredibly long chapter if I did that. I will have to think of something else to cheer him up with. *evil grin* Perhaps based on the very cute pic from Godchild that Zan posted in her zip folder (the one of Cle leading Cain around in a wig and a veil) *well chuffed with that one! Snarfff!!*

xx.Sadie

Re: *whoops*

[dreamsincyanide]

XD That's one of my favorite images from the entire series. HaremGirl!Cain is mighty sexy.

(Encore! Encore!)

A delicious end to a very steamy series! I can't wait until I have time to buckle down and start converting it into doujin form. ^__^

me neither *slurp*

[silverlinepark]

I'm looking forward to seeing some of these tasty illustrations. In the meantime I will just have to content myself with gazing upon Little earl Loveliness in his dancing girl outfit. (Now so desperate for *squee* that I've ordered parts four through six of Godchild in French anyway!! It'll do my linguistic talents good...)

*repeat to fade*