Pairechallenge: Bittersweet Moments

[silverrosecross]

Title: Bittersweet Moments
Author: Silverrosecross
Characters: Peter/Claire
Challenge: Challenge #3 “Hidden”
Rating: PG

A quick brush of skin on skin, the feeling of the air moving around her when no one is there, his warm breath on her neck, his hands on her waist, the weight of his body around hers.

Their passion is always hidden; invisible embraces

Comments

[shalinilahiri]

I really liked the angst and the pain in this drabble. Powerful words.

[silverrosecross]

thanks, it was my first try at angst (well angst in 100 words) so glad it was ok

[ronniekins77]

Oh, wow, this was lovely. The way you used hidden in this prompt seems so common, but the way you've written it certainly is not. I really liked how you incorporated Peter's invisibility and the spontaneous regeneration that comes along with the love bites into this drabble. Also really loved the last line, that their pain is the one thing that's able to be seen. Fantastic job on this. :)

And, btw, I love your layout!

[silverrosecross]

Thanks for the great comment it made me smile! I just thought their powers lended themselves so nicely to a hidden relationship that you couldn't not mention them.

The layout was a bit of an experiment really was just playing around with psp and ended up with a banner I liked, but thanks.

[paynesgrey]

Sweet! A perfect tribute to Paire. Wicked cool job.

[silverrosecross]

Thanks :)

[ohbrilliant]

Aw, wow. This is really sad and touching...poor Paire and their tragic love. Wonderful job :)

[silverrosecross]

thanks am glad i managed to get the right mood across

[anonymous]

Love the contrast between the hidden passion and visible pain :) Lovely :)

Joanna

[silverrosecross]

Thanks, glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting