The Window: Chapter 13...

[silvershiner]

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  Smex and stuff

Window

Chapter Thirteen

“I’m glad to see that smile has finally been wiped of your smug face.”
Well, at least someone was happy this morning. Sakura gave Ino an unimpressed glare across the table and sat down with her face to the sun. The waitress zipped over

Comments

[runswithkunai]

[[Hey, this is ane_s_thesia. ^_^ On my RP account. ANKO LOVE!]]

Oh, my god! T.T SO sad! Much, much sadder than I think I'd been expecting. You've got this 'forbidden affair' thing down so freakin' well, I don't think I'll be able to read another one without comparing it to yours. /sighs/ You kill me.

Quick beta-esque stuff for you. I figure you appreciate it, right? (If not, tell me to shut up! /laughs/) Just gonna quote and bold the stuff that you might wanna fix, cool?

“I’m glad to see that smile has finally been wiped of your smug face.”

Kakashi doubted there were such things as bachelor jays who fucked about for a few years doing nothing but staring out of windows blankly and drinking too-sweet tea when they should have been reading mission briefings.
You'd said just before this that he was drinking coffee. ^_^

It was completely impractical far a ninja of his rank to keep a wife and a home, knowing perfectly well that one day he wouldn’t come back from a mission.

... You three kids are the only ones he’s ever passed ever anything.”

[zaila]

Oh! I was so surprised and happy to see that you had updated again! You've definitely got this whole "taboo" situation down pat. I can't even read any KakaSaku now without comparing it to yours. Honestly. :D

[water_faerie]

HECK YEAH! I love this story so much.. I got more into Sasu/Saku and Ita/Saku as there hasn`t really been much good Kaka/Saku stuff, but I really like this fic :)

[inniyah]

I know this must sound silly, specially because, Sakura said she was in birth control..... but I can't help thinking that she is gonna get pregnant and all is going to get very complicated for both of them, after all a baby would be the prove of that they did.

I think that the fact that you describe everytime that Kakashi uses condoms, except for this time, can have only two meanings:
------To show Kakashi incredible thrust in Sakura and a delopment in their relationship. Maybe that she is different of "other girls".
OR
------Something is going to go wrong and she is going to get pregnant and All is gonna get complicated. And after Kakashi's mision, hell is gonna break loose and there is going to be a lot of dramma.

[bjfactory]

I just want to say how incredibly satisfied and happy I am with this chapter. The emotional smex at the end was SO good. Ku! And Kakashi finally got to get Sakura's payment for having taught her the genjutsu, eh? ;)

Sweet!

I have to agree with a lot of what I read other people say about this chapter. Currently, it is my favorite too. It just puts the cherry on-top. He seemed like he was totally not involved emotionally with Sakura right from the beginning, all the way to when she visited him and he agreed that she should go and was amused when she didn't... but that second time when he woke her with the totally HOT smex, he was agreeing with her this time just through words by he was totally not ready to let her go.

XD

God I loved the ending part! This is why KakaSaku is my crack pairing. It was a very satisfying read, CHIYA!!