The Window: Chapter 15 (part 2)...

[silvershiner]

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  Greasy chopsticks...

He was there, sitting at the ramen bar, guzzling noodles so fast it was hard to imagine how he didn’t choke. Hinata froze on the spot, biting her lip. What to say? She so badly wanted to be like one of the other girls - like Sakura - who could walk over

Comments

[zaila]

*SWOONS* Will write a more coherent review later.

[inner_angel]

I would like to reiterate here my admiration for your awesome writing and to commend you for another brilliant instalment!

Also, wanted to mention something I forgot to point out in my FF review. Didn’t Kakashi take drunken-Sakura to her apartment after the Hyuuga ceremony? Granted, it was dark and he was head down in her panty drawer but stil... it counts as a first time.

Keep up the excellent work!!

[silvershiner]

Ahhh.... damn it. My memory is just full of holes. XD

[monique_27]

Oh...oh my goodness! *>.<*

It just figures. They're gettng close, it's not just a fling, things aren't so shitty anymore - BAM! "DRAMA IZ HERE, BIATCHEZ!" *;.;*

So in-character. So sad ...Oh Sakura. Kakashi. Naruto. *cuddles them - pets Naruto lovingly*

I like Hinata, but I really want to slap her right now or something. And Ino. Gods, Ino, don't be disappointed! And Shika and Chouji and a disappointed Iruka! *>.<* Also, Genma as serious and a mediator was just brilliant (I usually see him as a teasing, funny, perv in Fandom).

I don't know how Tsunade will take all of this. Or Sasuke. Shizune already hinted that they're in deep shit, but now she and Hinata are in trouble too! *>.I really like that you presented reasons for why there's a law and taboo and so much sigma and didn't just say "OH! Relationship! Bad!" I'm very much of the mind "Shinobi don't live long - enjoy it while you can" and if you want to be with someone who is a consenting adult then, teacher or not, do it, so actual reasons for why this is bad and the added "

[anonymous]

Maybe it's just me, but I think this doujin deserves to end badly for both of them. This is pretty bad [what happened or is happening between sakura and kakashi]. But I love it =]

[lef]

Your updates always manage to make my day. Much love to this chapter, this story is definitely great.

I really felt for Sakura, and I can't bring myself to feel sorry for Naruto right now... I guess it's just his acting on his emotions personnality, still his reaction was really harsh, considering Kakashi and Sakura are both his friends. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter to find out what made Naruto react this way, if he regrets the way he acted or not, and how Sakura will try to make up with him... and what about Sasuke? And of course, I'm curious as to what Tsunade's reaction will be, as well as how the whole village of Konoha will take this situation.

Anyway, thanks for this awesome chapter! I really like your other stories too and I'm amazed that you always seem to find a new way to explore the many aspects of the KakaSaku relationship... You're a very good storyteller, but your style is also excellent, which isn't that common a trait among fanfic writers these days.