The Window: Chapter 16...

[silvershiner]

Title: The Window
By: Silvershine

Pairing: KakaSaku
Rating: M/R/NC-17
Warnings:  Carousels...

Window

Chapter Sixteen

Shizune licked her finger and flicked through the wedding magazine on her desk, sighing as she did so. It was a quiet morning in the Hokage tower today. The Hokage herself hadn’t arrived yet and only a handful of people had popped in to

Comments

[neko_no_kaze]

A little splash of realism, right? It was refreshing in that not a lot of Kaka/Saku fiction turn in that direction. The emotion and the drama were very well played out. That they’re still together at the end is heart-wrenchingly beautiful. I loved it, like I do your other works, but the craftsmanship in this takes the cake. Tragically sad, but at the same time you make a small, little hope come through.

I will patiently and contently wait until the next installment you write.

[alory_shannon]

...Kakashi said that yes, they were in love.

I loved it all--I always do--but that facet of this chapter was just perfect. Beautiful. Wonderful writing.

OMG

[anonymous]

I knew it was coming but I was still shocked at the outcome of what happened. Once again you have managed to masterfully portray Sakura and Kakashi in a more realistic approach to there romance. I look forward to future chapters and the outcome of Sakura's and Kakashi's punishment. The day you quit writing is the day the world mourns.

[anonymous]

AWESOME CHAPTER ! ! ! I mean all your chapters ahve been great but this is just pure addiction to the nth degree ... Im going to take a wild guess and say that Kakashi said the he was in love with sakura .. tisk tisk

[cascadingiris]

There is absolutely no wonder that so many people are liking KakaSaku. You write in such a compelling way -- it's so addicting.

I'm so sure that Kakashi said that he loved her...

Lovely chapter (aside from the punishments of course.) ^___^