FIC:

Feb 03, 2009 19:26

Title: Noise
Part: 1 of 1-shot.
Genre: Romance/General
Characters/Pairings: KuroFai
Ratings: PG 13+ -- Recommended for people over 13 unless accompanied by an adult. may contain adult themes
Warnings: AU, un-beta’d D:
Summary: Kurogane is from a quiet place, but that doesn’t mean he’s never heard noise… just not noise like Fai’s.
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tsubasa, kurofai, fanfiction

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ellethill February 3 2009, 11:28:22 UTC
*sigh* This was absolutely lovely - I couldn't get enough of all the metaphors, and the idea at the very base of the story was wonderful~!

Great job!

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l0t0phage February 3 2009, 19:12:49 UTC
It was so pretty and lovely <3<3<3 The atmosphere of it was perfect!

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silverwing147 February 4 2009, 07:20:15 UTC
Thank you O//////O

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silverwing147 February 4 2009, 07:15:27 UTC
Bahaha, that sounds about right, second sentence in ^^; Thanks very much, I'll fix that up.

I'm glad you liked it =D

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orthewallpaper February 4 2009, 20:59:21 UTC
This actually very good. Quite a few mistakes, but the story itself was beautiful. I really did love it.

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silverwing147 February 4 2009, 21:08:18 UTC
Thanks very much.

I glanced over it again just now and there are quite a few spots where I changed topic in the middle of paragraphs and whatnot. Not very smooth construction. Next time will be better! Wooo!

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