Utakata [Transience] - NaoxShin - 1/4

[silveryxdark]

Title: Utakata
Author: infinitysanti/silveryxdark
Rating: PG/PG-13?
Genre: Romance, fluff, minor angst
Warning: Manxman, possible romantic cliches etc.
Disclaimer: I will never own them. D:
Summary: Life is ephemeral and seasons continue their stately march. Time passes by, waiting for no one, but Shin waits.
A/N: Sooooooooo this has been in the

Comments

[wlifers]

*is reading*

[wlifers]

okay i'm done reading.

ermm, first off I read this because I know all the characters (lol).

I like how you described the events between Shin and Nao. Not draggy and lengthy, but still able to capture nicely what is the thing going on between them...

and i like this line:
I don't hear the call of travel. I hear only your voice.
reason for liking... i don't know. lol. i just like it. (:

i'll be waiting for the next chapter - is eager to know what's gonna happen...

[silveryxdark]

Ahaha :3 I see. Kagrra,. <3

Thank you very much! ^^

[dis_ambiguous]

Very easy read; you make the transition between flashback and the present so smoothly! I can see why you think this might be the best piece you've ever written bb. My heart sorta broke for Shin at the end but out of some sadistic tendency I adore seeing a character broken just like this. I wouldn't mind if you left him pining away..I'll keep reading!!

"He's been a little quieter, a little more hopeful, and a little lonelier." <- fucking love.

[silveryxdark]

Aw thank you so much bby :D I really appreciate your comments :') I'll post more asap :D

[_yoki_]

Oh, wow... it's so beautiful.

When I finished reading, I forgot it was only part one of four. x_x It's so beautiful and.... I want to describe it as elegant and gentle, but... well, maybe it's not so strange to want to, but oh my, it really is so beautiful.

Even if you didn't continue, this is a gorgeous piece on its own.

I'm looking forward to the next part!!!

Thank you for posting it~

<3 <3 <3 <3

[silveryxdark]

Thank you for reading and the lovely comments. :) ♥

[chibi_pon]

So sad, yet so beautiful...
I look forward to read the next part~

[silveryxdark]

Thank you very much ♥

[hee_glance]

Ohh, this is really beautiful. I don't actually know these characters, but they seem wonderful and I'm very excited for the next part. :)

[silveryxdark]

XD Thank you very much! ♥