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setter101 May 30 2011, 12:54:08 UTC
Personally, I loved it!

Madison is really pretty, her eyes are amazing. I lol'd at her willingness to be skimpily clothed in front of everyone.She is indeed a kickass firefighter too! xD

I really hope that she and Justin work out, as he is one of the least swamp monster - like Sims in Twinbrook.

I'm excited to see the next chapter, and hopefully some babies. :D <3

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simhop May 30 2011, 22:11:28 UTC
Aww, thanks! It's really encouraging.

I have a thing for red hair and blue/green eyes, haha. She is one of my fav founders, though it really is hard to choose.

I've started on the next part already so hopefully I'll finish it soon. I have a lot of Gen 1 played out already, actually. It took quite a bit of courage to write this stuff up, lol.

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makebelievetree May 30 2011, 18:58:09 UTC
Wow, this was a good start! I love the added conversation you do, especially this:
Ami: Ohh, Veronica you’re so lucky you get to drive that truck! Honk the horn, honk it!!
That's the same thing I would do!! XD

I'm looking forward to more, Veronica is such a lovable sim! :D

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simhop May 30 2011, 22:16:17 UTC
Yay, I wasn't scolded for that~! I like to think that my voice is like the little person in my Sim's heads. Why it's the only one in grey.

I'll start on the next chapter asap, so just wait a bit. :D

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beckett_legacy July 9 2011, 12:08:12 UTC
Veronica looks very cute in the firefighter uniform! Hopefully the poor dear will have some actual walls soon, so she can stop parading around in front of the neighbours. Although it doesn't seem to bother her much...

I like Justin! He's one of like three or four Twinbrook sims I'd let marry into my legacy XD Plus he's kinda a geek, which is nice.

"Then this lady spontaneously made funny faces at Veronica in passing and I start to wonder if this town is just full of crazies…"
Haha, yes it is! But Twinbrook has to be my favourite town!

*goes to read more*

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simhop July 9 2011, 14:16:50 UTC
Walls or no walls, she still walks around in her skimpiness outside. She's the only Sim that I've had that had no problem stripping to take a shower without walls. Not sure how that happened, lol.

And Justin is a dear man; very sweet and never really caused any problems. He does have very dominant genes it seems... But you'll see that as you read. :D

With that, I hope you continue to enjoy the story. (I don't want to spoil anything.)

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