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Fullen It Up 0.1 ~ New Kid on the Block

Jul 22, 2011 02:57

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ryannlive July 22 2011, 16:34:56 UTC

Audrey is so pretty, but hopefully her night of gym doesn't have any.. Unexpected consequences.*-*

Loving it so far! xD

ryannlive July 22 2011, 16:36:43 UTC

grr, not gym - fun!Stupid autocorrect.

simhop July 22 2011, 18:42:55 UTC

She really is. I wasn't even intending to use her in a legacy until after she was made because I just fell that much in love with her.

Oh, you'll see soon enough what results from her little escapades... ;] Hehehe! Thanks for reading!

raeraine July 22 2011, 16:45:46 UTC

Great legacy so far! I really like how you have more of a story to it. Can't wait to the next chapter!

simhop July 22 2011, 18:45:37 UTC

Thanks so much! I love hearing any comments, especially ones like this~! I've gotten a lot of positive remarks on the story-telling aspect so I decided to keep writing in first person. It's been a big help. Thanks for reading!

nickey_elysse July 29 2011, 00:46:34 UTC

I didn't think I'd like it in first person, I usually don't, but you did a way more amazing job than I expected. I'm glad I gave you a chance and sorry for prejudging you before reading. (I'm always wrong when I do that.) And I think authors notes are charming. Sprinkle them in as liberally as you'd like.

gossamersims August 29 2011, 16:03:36 UTC

AHHHH AUDREY I LOVE YOU BUT KURT IS A CREEPER D: