When Worlds Collide

[similiesslip]

Mother said she wasn't good enough for me. But that's Mother for you, always snobby and fussy. I'm not sure she thinks anything in life is quite good enough for me. Mother switched me from one teacher to another at the drop of a hat, if anyone dared give a bad grade to her Daniel and any clothes I had that were bought ready-made were immediately

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[sdaisyk]

*tears*

[similiesslip]

::hugs::

Thanks for reading.

[basric]

You did the family dynamics perfectly. Though part fiction part true, remembering the young man, I can hear him speaking those words in his mind. The mother in law was a horror, you portrayed her perfectly from the sketchy details I gave you. Excellent work. Taking his POV was genius.

[similiesslip]

Thank you. I did think about switching points of view but sometimes that is confusing for the reader.

What amazes me is that you lived this, at least your side. I am amazed at your emotional strength through it all.

I really enjoyed being partners. Hopefully we make it through this week in Idol:)

[basric]

I don't see how anyone who reads yours doesn't vote for you. its that good.

[similiesslip]

You are too kind. And a great partner:)

[soprano1790]

Wow! This is such a sad story. Very very well written though. Great job! I look forward to reading the other half. Lol

[similiesslip]

Her side is amazing. So much was going on with her that day yet she is always the professional, saving lives right and left and dealing with difficult relatives and job politics.

Thanks for reading!

[millysdaughter]

Heartbreaking.

[similiesslip]

Basric's entries are based on her life in nursing so the medical parts of this entry truly happened.

I can't imagine what the poor man went through.

(we changed names and of course, mine is mostly fiction, imagining feelings etc)

[similiesslip]

She's a great writer. She wrote first and I just followed her lead. She has lived through some amazing experiences.

However you came here, thanks for reading:)