Title: "Digging for Brown Gold"

[similiesslip]

It was a dry, hot day. I desperately hoped the ranch owner I was headed to was someone who enjoyed hot weather. Anything to put him in a good mood

Comments

[majesticzaichik]

The entries this week keep getting more and more amusing. i really cracked up with the line on how she should be looking for a nice fella instead of dino shit XD.

[similiesslip]

I'm glad something made you laugh:) I would like to be a more amusing writer but that doesn't seem to come naturally to me.

Thanks for commenting!

[ecosopher]

I love your youthful enthusiasm in this piece :)

[similiesslip]

I'm glad you liked something. This isn't my favorite piece but that topic is..difficult!

[millysdaughter]

This is fun!

[similiesslip]

I'm glad you liked it:)

[whipchick]

The character of the rancher is great - love his voice!

[similiesslip]

I'm glad you liked the rancher. I feel very uncertain when I write fiction.

[noodledays]

:) these were fun characters.

[similiesslip]

Thanks for letting me know you like them:)