Title: "Beginnings"

[similiesslip]

They both exist beneath the ground, the Pebble and the seed. Water seeps through the pebbles, awakening the sleepy seed

Comments

[java_fiend]

I really enjoyed this, lady. It's a little different for you and I think you branched out well. Your words are absolutely beautiful and evocative. A new life can absolutely be something to be enjoyed. *HUGS*

[similiesslip]

I guess it points (maybe) to what I am trying to create in real life..not a child but a new beginning.

Good luck with your own endeavors. I know you'll do great!

[marstokyo]

I liked it a lot!

[similiesslip]

Thanks so much for letting me know:)

[basric]

I Thought this beautiful. Wonderful piece.

[similiesslip]

Thanks so much for your kind words on my bit of whimsy:)

[jacq22]

This piece was truly beautiful, and the pace of it was just right, keep writing the poetry.

[similiesslip]

Thank you. I used to write only poetry. Your comment is so encouraging, maybe I should revist that part of me.

Thank you so much for your kind words!

[similiesslip]

I've been really down so I'm not sure where this "came from" but I like to think that I am regaining some hope.

So writing it made me feel better. Does your writing ever do that for you? Or am I odd?:)