Write my name in the sand - 2drabbles from in_vazn challenge

Oct 02, 2007 22:15

Write my name in the sand

Written for: in_vazn table 2 drabble challenge
Author: simp_anna
Pairings: Kim JaeJoong and Shim Changmin
Rating: NC-17 for Cheating (This is my first lemon, sorry if it's bad >.<)
Summary: 2 drabbles, prompt Hurt and Cheating

Thanks to evangellie

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drabbles, jaemin, challenge, write my name in the sand

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moumo October 2 2007, 22:58:27 UTC
Wow,I liked it a lot, and for your first lemon it was great! I also enjoyed the plot, good job :D

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simp_anna October 3 2007, 08:57:32 UTC
Thanks =D

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sharkbait_ha October 2 2007, 23:33:28 UTC
oh ouch. Poor Min. ;_____;

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simp_anna October 3 2007, 08:58:13 UTC
Yeah... maybe I love angst too much :/

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theresa_lynne October 3 2007, 02:28:43 UTC
This calls for another sequel. You might as well make it a chaptered fic totally entitled, "Sequels" XDDD

ILU.

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simp_anna October 3 2007, 08:59:28 UTC
I thought of a chaptered fic but "chapters" are too short so it will stay as a... series of drabbles!

ILU too <33 XD

(and I love your icon!)

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jaemint October 3 2007, 03:30:02 UTC
Ohh, poor Minnie. Poor Yunnie. Poor Jae. I hope everything will be all right soon. You did a very good job even though it's your first lemon. I like it a lot. :D

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simp_anna October 3 2007, 08:59:58 UTC
Oh thanks, I'm glad you liked it! <3

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xiahbebeh October 3 2007, 04:38:14 UTC
This was good for a first lemon XD
I liked the whole cheating scenario going on.
I gotta admit though MinSu is hot~ ♥ Sadastic!Junsu XD

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xiahbebeh October 3 2007, 04:38:37 UTC
P.S I love how you made Yunnie so uke. *fetish for that* xP; ♥

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simp_anna October 3 2007, 09:01:43 UTC
This was good for a first lemon
Just for a first? So it was not *that* good? :/

But thanks and yay for the Sadistic!Junsu and Uke!Yunho XDDD

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xiahbebeh October 3 2007, 20:13:41 UTC
xD I didn't mean it in that context. It was good though o3ob ♥

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