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torn in two - oneshot

Apr 11, 2008 11:32

Torn in two

Author: simp_anna
Pairings: Jaemin, Yoomin
Summary: Sometimes, feelings are really hard to fight back

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torn in two, jaemin, yoomin, one-shot

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tvxqislurve April 11 2008, 10:05:22 UTC

Awe.. even though Jaejoong is the one who has been cheated on briefly, I'm a YooMin person so i feel really sorry for Yoochun.

“You won’t stay here with me even if I ask you to, right?”

^ That in particular, broke my heart.

simp_anna April 11 2008, 11:11:01 UTC

i think it's a good thing if you feel sorry for Yoochun. i mean, he's sad too ya know ;)

i'm sorry if i broke your heart, maybe i can send you cookies so you'll forgive me?

honkingantelope April 11 2008, 10:26:48 UTC

Jeez, I LOVED that even though it was so sad ;-; Great Job! ^____^

simp_anna April 11 2008, 11:11:47 UTC

yeah, i kinda love angst >.< thanks a lot!

kurogoma April 11 2008, 11:00:54 UTC

i love jaemin the most, but yoomin and minho come close enough that good fics like yours about complicated love triangles make it hard for me to choose.

most of all, i really liked how changmin's conflicted feelings were portrayed, and even though he made a mistake, i was glad he realized through this mistake who he truly loved the most. yoochun appeared in a point of his life in which he wasn't sure where he was and what he wanted ~ at least now he does.

simp_anna April 11 2008, 11:14:14 UTC

oh wow, good fics like yours thank you! <3

i'm glad you liked it, it was quite hard to portray changmin's feelings, he's not the talkative type! yeah, now he knows exactly what he wants and who he loves, mistakes can be helpful sometimes... well, somehow.

baegopa April 11 2008, 11:23:48 UTC

(´･ω･`) love love love your fanfiction :D

jaemin in the end ♥
But still, sad chunnie breaks my heart a little..

simp_anna April 11 2008, 11:28:57 UTC

thank you!

jaemin's still my OTP, i couldn't write a different ending ;)
yeah, poor him, but he's strong, he'll be better.

_fujitsu_ April 11 2008, 12:06:56 UTC

uwaa... poor Jae =((
but I like the end. It's not metter anymore how you understood you true feelings, the main point that finally you had understood them clearly.

you are the one of my favourite fic-writers. I like your style!
thank you very much =)

simp_anna April 11 2008, 15:21:48 UTC

thanks to you! =)))